this was great :) i always noticed that DJ would have been born during Palm Springs, and i thought this was a nice interpretation, and i liked how the lesson was incorporated into it. great job.

i've read quite a few of your stories in the past, and i've always found them entertaining, and very true to Full House. i'll miss your stories, but good luck in the future!

I really think that the overall story was good except for a few grammar problems. I really agree with what you said about how there are families out there that are loving, caring,and good.