I HATE THIS MY SISTER WAS READING IT AND I STARTED PUNCHING HER! DO NOT MAKE THESE ANY MORE FOR HER TO READ PLEASE... IT WOULD REALLY MAKE ME FEEL BETTER. NOT TRYING TO BE RUDE I AM SURE ITS GREAT COULD YOU FIND ANOTHER WEB SITE PLEASE?

Me temo que veo Hermione aquí tonta, creida y hipócrita. ..

I loved this story! From the slow build to action to plot, you did a great job. Thank you! I love how you incorporated Luna’s game and the stone, Severus’s spying, and Draco’s secret crush that Hermione learned while in disguise. Amazing plot. Stayed up far later than I should have in order to finish reading this.

Thank you very much for your story. I really liked it very much, especially because you developed it so slowly that everyone could stay in character. And I'm glad you gave Snape a chance to life and even to love after the war... :)

Thanks a lot for your story. I like it very much so far. And I don't think it develops too slow. You're right, it's more realistic like that, and I really like watching Snape taking two steps forward and one step back all the time.

Hello! I don't know if you are still involved in fandom, or even see these reviews, but I had to take a second to let you know how very, very much I loved this story! Snape and Granger were both wonderfully in character and I loved the intricate plot with all the kidnappings and mysteries and amazing magic. Thanks so much for writing this and sharing it, and for leaving it up here on this site so that people like me who are newer to this world can access and enjoy it. I can't believe English is not your first language. There were a few SPAG errors, but honestly not noticeably more than in any other fic.

Oh, you also asked if readers preferred this story or ItCWMtM and I have to say that I prefer this one, but really only because I think the plot was woven in a little tighter here. I also really love your other story.

Cheers!

Loved it! Thank you for sharing your story!

beautiful.

Epic I Literally vibrating in my seat with Excitement and Clapping!

SO Cute

Hi, scf. I have read both your stories - this one several times - and I prefer this one. I think it's because it has more in the way of plot driving it. The other one seems rather aimless sometimes. Both are enjoyable, though. Thank you!

Awww, Snape being made the object of ridicule is always so romantic.

Between sitting in classes, planning classes, teaching classes, starting a choir group, starting a drama group, being involved with a choir group, being involved in the drama group, sleeping, eating, hanging out with her friends, going on walks, practicing with the Elder DADA group...when does she have time to do the work that is her actual reason for being there? And does she not know where the pain relief potions are kept?

Great story!

Absolutely wonderful, especially your characterisation of Snape. I look forward already to rereading this in the future. Definitely one for the favourites.