Very sweet and in character.

THIS WAS ADORABLE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

That. Was. Soooooo. Beautiful!

This was beautiful. It made me miss things I didn't even live, and that's the best feeling you can get after reading a bittersweet story. Thank you for this! :)

This was a perfectly written one shot. It had the most adorable combination of EdWin and family fluff. Loved it!

Cute. Very cute.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

aww. . . it doesn't get cuter than this. well done!

Aww sooooo sweet!

Oh that was totally adorable - I loved it! X3

this is really adorable. i love the symbolism of the fireflies-how they represent childhood and home and all those things the elrics missed out on. and did i mention this is adorable?

love love love! another one please?

Hang on, most people get their first kiss at twelve? Where is that statistic coming from? I'm seventeen and I still haven't gotten mine! But then, I'm... ahem, "sheltered".

Anyway, this fic was adorable. I loved how it went through the different stages of their lives, connecting them all.

Brilliant job. ]

Aw...this fic is very sweet. It's well-written, too. I could almost see it happening - I wish it would happen! It's good; I can pretend it's real

Aw. This is very cute D Thank you for writing this one-shot. I hope you don't mind if I added this to my C2. Keep writing, these are really great!

wow...it was a great story! i truly loved it! great job!

it's very creative and it has a lot of depth in it...who would've thought that fireflies can bring about such depth in the story?

i praise you and your work...kudos!