Okay i just started reading this story but come on you say you love her and then just leave her ahhh. But can't wait to see how this story turns out.

Love the story. But there are some mistakes in your french. Here are the correct translations :
S'il vous plait: Please.
t'es trop grand pour tes cullottes: You're too big for your britches. The correct expression in French would be "t'es culotté, toi"
C'est vrai: That's true
mon Dieu: My God
T'es en é rreur: You're mistaken. Correct translation is "tu te trompes" or "vous vous trompez" (polite form)
merde: Shit
il a ras d'é sprit: he doesn't have any (common) sense here to, the correct expression would be "il n'a aucune jugeotte" (argotic French).
chè re 'tite bête: (That) poor little dear - here again, better translated in "pauvre petite"
allons: Come, let's go, or follow
C'est assez: that's enough
fils de putain: son of a bitch. Correct expression is ""Fils de pute"... That's a terribly frown upon expression in French...
Ici on parle francais, sí: Do you speak French (is French spoken), yes? Better translated in "vous parlez français, non (or "n'est-ce-pas)?"
Voila. Hope I've been helpful. Was easy to me to correct as French is my mother tongue.
Eric.

Nice story so far but I think you made Starfire too angry of a person when it comes to Blackfire. I get they're family and all but I don't think she'd get THAT angry over someone pointing out the obvious about her.

It's good but it's severely hinted that Red X is Jadon Todd

so awesome

yay i love it

This story sounds so promising! Can't wait to finish reading it! Although, indont see why Wally wouldn't see Dick since he still works with Batman who is still part of the Justice League right? )

i love it!

I love the part where the team said "I love you..."

Especially Raven. That was a great moment, both touching and hilarious. Nice job on the story

GOD! I love this story!

awhh,

e i soo love this story,

the seqeal to this story is it out yet or no?

lmao

KABOOM

heheeh

im lovn the story so far

its kinda diff from wat ive read before :D

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kori is gunna see dick

after like a long time

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Dan Dan Dan

whos at the doorbell?

lol

i love Gar

in this story