Reviews for Fooling the Protector
pouncii chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
You might not be alive or anything, but I just want you to know that I favorited this and I come back and read it often when I'm in a sh*t mood (often). It's one of the best things I've ever read and I really hope you still write, even if it's for a different fandom or even for school. You're incredibly talented. Please don't be dead.
Quaxos Jellicle chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Woah thanks to this i am now a lover of tumblebrutus and poncival slash wonderful work.
ConfusifyingCristy chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
So far, this is my only favorite slash fic. I like the part when Munk thinks that Tumble's really Demeter. I was laughing throughout that whole part! -sonnygirl100 3
mistofan101 chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
please wright more.. this is a great fanfic...
Misto4Ever chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
I agree, A sequeal would be wonderful. This was very well written, and although the MIsto scared me a little bit, it was funny and fit in perfectily in the story.

Please write more, I love you fics!
ktCatsbone chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
You should write a sequel, this is a very good story. You are very talented
Dabadubu chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
OHH MY GOD!

REALLY, YOU HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUEL

NOW!

IF YOU DONT I MUST REMIND YOU EVERY WEEK YOU HEAR

WRITE!

THIS WAS AMAZING!1
LupinTonks14 chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
Please make another chapter! I love this story!
RIPStitches chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
Ohh my gawd this story has completely made my day. No, my week. I've just been sitting here for the last ten minutes giggling like a total crackpot, and I don't care because it was GREAT. I'm going to be laughing every time I see munkus now. PLEASE write more! *prostrates self on ground* Your Pounce is so adorable, and your Misto is absolutely hilarious. A wonderful parody of how he's portrayed by so many people on here. I like how you've got Alonzo as well. Gah! More! :D
PSYchOtiC-teNdencieS chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
Although Mistoffelees and Munkustrap scared the crap out of me, I absolutely loved this story! Very entertaining, building up quite believably to the kissing and such towards the end. There were a few moments when I had a hard time picturing that end scene in particular, but it really was so cute. I just wasn't always sure as to whose limbs were where and stuff...

Such an enjoyable read. Do write more.
Tumble Bandit chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Absolutly loved it! You wrote this story perfectly and you couldn't have made it cuter! Keep writing because you are one of the best, in my opinion.
rumpleteazerrrr chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
I really liked this story. I love how Pouncival is more crazy one and Tumblebrutus just follows. Haha, it's even like that when they're cuddling and such. Really good writing. You're Mistoffelees is so wierd, but fits in the story. I think you should write another slash story. You're really good at it.
Kirsten Louise chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
The idea of Pouncival switching Skimbleshanks' tea out for scotch is priceless! I loved the characterization of Pouncival as everyone's favorite prankster and Tumblebrutus as his reluctant accomplice.

The nuzzling certainly didn't hurt, either. Very cute.

Overall, a pretty good read. But your Mistoffelees, I must say, made me want to gag. *shudders* ;)
Adi Sagestar chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
*twitch* *twitch*

*twitch*

Gaah... the sickness... the OOCness... eyuurg.

Not, of course, that it was a bad story...
Wolfjet chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
Awesome story! Very engaging, and you portrayed the relationship between Pouncival and Tumblebrutus very well. Your writing style is very good also. Love the pairings!
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