This. This was Beautiful. I wish it were longer. How do I get the rest?

I really like your Fanfiction and I hope you will Update soon.

Wow just wake Harry up already. It's getting ridiculous how long it's getting stalled.

Nice story so far. Too bad it is dead now.

By the way, someone else is passing off your story as their own... I thought you should know this, if you are alive and all...

Her son from another place and time.

Grim ... assassin

Good story.

Good insight.

Intriguing idea! Severus is supposed to father her child. Wouldn't Sirius protect Lily?

lol harry is kind of stupid here, but it's in character so it's good

It's a shame this story seems long dead. It's pretty good and has a decent plot going as well as enough to leave you wanting more. I like the interactions between both Lily and Harry and I think you've characterized Dumbledore well as well as the world as a whole. I admit to wondering whether you had any plans for the Horcrux or whether or not Dumbledore was going to become a true antagonist.

One thing that made the first few chapters after Harry awoke a bit frustrating was the LONG time it took him to realize he was in a different universe. He grew up Muggle, it really shouldn't have been that big of a leap once Lily started talking about it only being two years not seventeen and Moody being alive and pictures in a bedroom...That aspect of the story really had me annoyed. The rest of it though was quite good! Perhaps one day you'll come back to it?

This seems like a good story!

Oh dear, In her panic she forgot to grab the stones.

very nice story

well it been more than 7 years since last update...

still would hope this is finished...

This is just really interesting I can't wait for more