Reviews for The First Night
Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
IS THIS THE ATLANTIC OCEAN OR MY TEARS
TopKat chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
lovely and very believeable. i like your characterisation of Teddy!
fayfan chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
Aww..! Very sweet! *pats Teddy on the head* I enjoyed reading this very much! )
zebrasdancing chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
nice
Emeralde chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
I have to admit that I never really liked stories about Harry and the others kids, because I didn't want the adventure to be over, but, well, I love this 3 it's wonderfull! This one is so going into my favorits 3 brilliant!
atrixb chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
I feel very blessed to come across such a gifted author like you. You captured the emotions of young Teddy wonderfully. This definitely goes onto my favs.
Lucie - or Lux chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
That was very, very good, and I don't say that often. :)

I love the way you described Teddy's relationships with Harry and with Ginny - you did a wonderful job of depicting Harry in a way that his eleven-year-old godson would see him, very believable. And the mention of Andromeda and how she wasn't to be trusted naming things was fantastic.

And the mention of the fathers never known by their sons - so poignant - you did a great job of imbuing emotion with getting sappy.

All in all, you made Teddy seem very human, and very real, and quite enjoyable. Thanks for a great read!
LOV3theARTS chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
ugh! Marmite? that stuff is so disgusting hahahaha
PaddyWaddy chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
My god, that was incredibly cute!
odogoddess chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
This is a very sweet story. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing.
katie janeway chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Aww. Very cute. I think this is the first fic referencing DH that I like...
runningfingers chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
This was very well-written. You did a very good job at portraying the emotions.
xxanglophilexx chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
Goodness, this was too sweet and adorable. I loved your Teddy. He was so sweet and insecure, and it was nice how he got to speak to his father. I loved it. :)