I have to say, i really enjoyed this story and im totaly sad that a) the story doesnt continue and b) that there are only sad endings planned for simon.
its kinda refreshing. like in the first sotry everything seemed fine and perfect but than everything gets fucked up and no peace can be found. i liked and hated that. hated cos of the lack of happy endings, like "nope, no happyness for you!" but also refreshing and new and better than these forced happyendings and realistic. life doesnt end happy. life goes on and ends always with death. the own death or the death of others.

and my imagination spreaded wildly. i made up a fanfiction fitting in this universe more or less at the time where in part 2 simon was by the family and everything seemed happy. before elvis had tricked him. i thank you for inspiring me to write these stories with my mind :)
im not thinking anywhere to publishing anywhere, btw. im a terrible writer and the characters wouldnt fit even closly to them in the story (i have problems seeing emotions and thinking wich emotions ppl would have and how they would react).

but maybe, like in my made up fan fics, some guy living in an extra diemension without any space or time could change the timeline and make it a happy ending. at least for me :)

again thank you for making this story and sorry that i spammend so many irrelevant letters here, just to state my opinion :)

And I was also hoping that 628 would get pregnant. So I liked that you were actually planning on that. :)

Still sad that it's "officially" dead. Oh well. :'(

Dammit… I accidentally hit "post" before I was finished. Anyway, I do have a question. How did Simon get infected with Chemical 606 the second time? That was a little vague in your "Spoilers" section.

Anyway, yeah. Sorry for the stalking.

Thank you for creating such an incredible, awesome, and unforgettable experience. :)

Oh… Thank you for coming back. :)
Even if it was only to tell us that this story is dead, I still appreciate it.
When I reached the conclusion of SE2, I actually predicted that he would have to use Chemical 606 to defeat E-O, so hearing you say "Yep, that's how I would've done it," was vet satisfying. :)
I'm glad you told us what you WOULD have done, had you continued.
In all honesty, I loved every second of this story. Sure, sometimes the grammar was distracting, and sometimes the characters were a little inconsistent. And yeah, maybe Simon was a whiny little bitch, but he was a believably justified whiny little bitch. I loved him as a character, because I could relate to him so much.
Also, even though some characters lacked consistency, at least you created realistic characters with surprisingly detailed development uncharacteristic of a fan fic. That was my favorite part of this story. You gave almost every character, no matter how important they were, some level of thought and development. It created compelling 3-dimensional heroes and villains that I loved to love or loved to hate.
And yeah, best 628 by far. :)

Also, I've never read anything in my entire life that I immediately wanted to reread after finishing the first time. So, kudos to you for that! :)

I do have a question tho
Also, I'm sorry for stalking your FanFic and deviantart accounts. I really wanted to know what happened. :/

Man I was surprised to see this in my story alerts. But I had a bad feeling it may have been a this story is dead note. I was right

To bad, 80% of all fan fiction is garbage and this one was not.

Just finished reading this for a second time. I'm still blown away at how incredible this story is. And I'm still depressed by the thought that it will never be finished. Please, Alius111. Come back. If you have a terrible case if writers block, I'd be more than willing to help you with ideas. Believe me. I have plenty of ideas on how to resolve this story. As a side note, I'd like to add that your interpretation of Experiment 628 is by far my favorite. Top notch characters you have here. But seriously, come back. I beg of you.

NOOOOOOOOO! I was afraid this would happen. As I was reading this story, I became concerned that Alius111 wouldn't have enough time to wrap it up. I knew the chapter count was dwindling... This has been one of the best things I have ever read, ever. The character development, the detailed descriptions, the settings. This story is phenomenal. And now I'm just depressed that it'll never be finished...

I'm rilly glad Elvis is gone (good ridance!) But I can't help but think; What about Bonnie? She's still pregnant, right? And now Elvis is gone before she could tell him. What'll happen to their child?

You.. you killed Reuben. First you kill Angel, then Reuben. What the HECK?!

OH! Bonnie! Oh, I hate Elvis, that son of a bitch! How DARE he treat Bonnie that way!

This chapter reminds me that I cannot stop reading this story. The suspense is killing me! What shall Simon encounter next?

By the way, I like the way you characterize the Empress. She sounds like a real asshole, not at all unlike my math teacher.

Heh, it was nice to see Simon finally take the next step in his relationship with 628. Okat so it was 628 who really took the next step but same point.

Things in this fic can get crazy pretty quick. Will we ever be treated to an explanation as to Acervus's survival? Will a crushed muzzle and a plummet into the ocean kill him when a shot from a plasma handcannon didn't? I hope the answers are yes and no!

Now I'm finally caught up with this story and all I have to say is things you've heard over and over; thank you for sharing this story, it's amazingly good, and please continue.