No abandones esta historia. Es muy buena. A sí que no renuncies a ella, quiero saber cómo termina. De verdad el suspenso me mata. No quiero que pase como otras historias que son tan buenas pero casi nunca las terminan. Eso sería una lástima debido a que tienes una maravillosa forma de escribir y recreas muy bien las escenas de acción. No quiero que pienses que estoy presionando ni nada porque sé que hay otras cosas que son más prioritarias que otras, pero cuando tenga un poco de tiempo y llegue la inspiración puedas volver a reanudar esta fantástica aventura.

Awesome premise, I hope you do end up picking this up again one day, I would like to see how Sasuke and Naruto's relationship develop, whether they end up growing closer or not at all. Thanks for writing!

Please continue writing! I really want to read more of this.
It's so cool and the plot is really going along with it.

WOW . . . I haven't been on for two years!
You're still as good a writer as ever, since I remembered you writing Walking Corpse, you had me crying T..T

Keep writing please, I would love to read more of your work )

when will be the next update? kinda one of the best out there.

Review please! \O/ I love ur writing so much ever since reading Walking Corpse.. You're an amazing author! Keep up the great work!

I really want to know what happens...UPDATE SOON PLEASE

oooh, i loved it. Though is this a yaoi? I hope not. Anyways, please update soon!

Funny Kisame! Very Funny!

No, they're equally bastard-like.

So good :) Sadly abandoned. :(

SO. UH. I hope you plan to update this. I really do. It's different. The storyline...meh, I've read similar things here and there, but the way you portray the characters is pretty refreshing. I like how they interact with each other.

Keep writing!

this is god! update it!

The premise of this story is so great! I love how many different cliches this story turns on its head: the fact that Naruto is disdainful of Sasuke (rather than blindly obsessing over him), that Sasuke himself came to ask Naruto for help (rather than insisting he'd never need his help), and that the both of them are now in trouble with Konoha (rather than Naruto always being its ultimate patriot). This story really is something different and refreshing. It would be really wonderful if you chose to continue it, but at this point, like the other reviewer, I don't have much hope. Still, if you are still checking your reviews, at the very least I wanted to let you know how unique I found the premise of this story to be. And I definitely wouldn't say no to a chapter 3. :)

This is a really good fic. I suppose there's no hope for it since it's been 2 years, but it's a shame it's not finished.