Sequel please

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

thanks for this story I loved it.

Awesoomeee~~~~~~this is brilliant.

Good story.

Great story thank you for writing it!

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Why didn't you show his reaction to finding out he was having twins? Seriously, his reaction would be hilarious! Great story, I love it..

Cute. I'm glad not all of the Weasley's were thieves.

You state in this chapter that Ron Weasley is Head Boy, but in the previous chapter Dumbledore tells Harry that he has been named Head Boy. You might want to fix that.

Loved it

i loved it but was a bit upset that harry didn't tell him about the twins

I very much enjoyed this story. However I was hoping to see Severus' reaction to Harry having twins. XD But oh well. You did a very good job.

I like your plot lines but for some reason this doesn't seem to be written all that well. The dialogue and thoughts are not smooth as I would expect of certain characters especially Severus. Dumbledore's evil characterization is fine, but for his age and the power he does hold in this world doesn't seem in line with how his personality is portrayed. He acts more like a jealous 16 yr old than an old man grasping for more power, which is what I think you're going for. Harry's characterization is fine, but the way he speaks doesn't seem like a cynical 17 year old either. He would use more contractions in stead of separating out each word. Also Severus who I could see keeping a journal would not have such rambling thoughts. He is a double agent to the two most powerful wizards and is trusted by both. He would be more contained. I will finish this story, but I thought I'd let you know I expected a lot more from your other stories after reading "Willing" and "A New Place to Stay."

I enjoyed this story very much. Thank you!