I lure it but it should be related t and not m

Really cute; I like it.

that was cute. made me want to go dance in the rain.

Why is it rated "M"? What's wrong with homosexuality? There are lots of slash stories rated "K".Change the rating,please.

This was good, but seriously? The concept of homosexuality? That's a stupid reason to put it on an M. There's nothing wrong with being gay. That one line ruined the whole story for me.

ohh that was so cute. i wish there were more stories like this on this site :-) very good job

~Zara

I love this piece

it's sweet and simple

the only issue I have is with the fact you gave it M rating "for the concept of homosexuality"

that is feeding other's ignorance

I am not meaning to be rude, but it's a personal mission of sorts.

please keep people like me in mind when you write your next slash

(which I hope you do soon)

Aw, this was sweet! Luna definitely is different, and I like the idea of meditating in the rain :) I would never have thought to connect Tonk and Luna, but the way you write it, it makes perfect sense that they could have had similar times at hogwarts. Good story!

aww, so cute... but my cuzzin had to ruin the moment... I was reading it and then he came and scared the Aych- ee- double hockeysticks out of me, plus i was in the dark so it was even more creepier... but good job! and then just as i finish writing this review i thoiught he was out of the room and he snuck up on me and shoved a Halloween mask at my face... he's so cruel...

Your's Truly

Ginnys-lost-twin

Second Class PoPaP

3rd Degree .

So sweet... I've never thought about a Luna/Tonks ship but I suppose it could work... You story was smooth. Calm and serene like Luna. Good work.

Luna/Tonks is my favorite 'ship. Those two were meant for each other! Please continue this fic!