Ahh, come on. Why'd you have to leave it there?

I love it when Neville is portrayed like this he is one of my absolute favs

Shame it's abandoned.

Um for that chapter two things stick out to me. 1) staying mad at someone and avoiding them for an entire week? It's still relatively within the range of believability, but its kinda dumb on Hermione's part. I would understand if it physically hurt her to a great extent or hit a nerve really deep, still a week is a long time. Personally I can only stay mad at my friends for a day at most. 2) at the end, the transition between Hermione in her bed to being in the common room is nonexistent. I think the two paragraphs describe Hermione sitting on her bed hugging her knees right after Harry goes up to bed, and then the next paragraph shows Hermione looking up from the common room fire seemingly hours later. You need either a line break or a transition, i.e. "she went down to the common room to ponder her issue when suddenly..." Thats really bad but I think it gets the point across. Otherwise, kudos and keep on writing!

Awwwww

That was adorable!

I seriously love this story you've written. Exactly how i've pictured them together.

I don't know how long ago you last updated this but i'll put this in my favorites and check every now and then to see if you've updated or not.

CUTE! GREAT JOB AUTHOR CHAN! it was such a lovely chappp! can't wait for the NEXTTTT!

Love the friendship between Harry & Hermione.

Completely ruined it. I was enjoying the Harry/Hermione friendship so much, this had been one of the best I've read, but I can't read any more. The ungrateful Hermione (did she forget that if it hadn't been for Harry she'd be a soulless shell?) was bad enough but the groveling, humiliated Harry is more than I can take.

This story is sappy, but well-written. I like it.

It has been 10 years!

I am sorry but this thing went from regular to bad in just 1 chapter and three lines. First not sure why keeping the moRon in the story at all, second no reason for the rapist to show his stupidity right away, specially because there was nothing to punish. As it is dead well RIP another story

When are you going to finish the story?

Britpicking:
assuming Hogwarts is somewhat near Inverness, sunrise on Christmas would be at 9:00. Does that fit with your timetable for the day?

Severity of responding to an ass who mocked you over your dead father. This is as off as canon almost. He MENTALLY stutterer ffs. You write well, I just dislike your choice in characters. Outtie.