Reviews for Fate |
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![]() ![]() Spent my morning reading half of your stories. Tonight at work I will be reading the rest |
![]() ![]() Nice job in blending with the movie and creating your own story. I'll count this as one of the best stories I have ever read. BTW: Sunset sent me here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I agree with Yuki. I need that power to fend off sleep. |
![]() ![]() LOVE THIS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was fun. Now to look around the rest of your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sunset's bar brought me here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, not sure about the time traveling kid, but save that this was a very enjoyable read. Good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the new 'backstory' of how the movie progressed withouth the bureau. Nice story so far, good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like badass Haru, and her interaction with the Baron. Little Haru was also cute. . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very, very interesting start, this shows promise! Ps. Sunset brought me here! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Sunset brought me here!" |
![]() ![]() Interesting story. Not sure how I feel about the Jonathon 'timing' twist, but still am interesting story overall. And mostly leaving a comment because Wanderer asked us to say 'Sunset brought me here!" So have fun with all of the incoming reads. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story SO much since I first read it years ago! I love their son so much and the future for him! And the whole story was absolutely amazing! Thank you so much for sharing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haru as a royal ward? Makes sense that Lune would view her as family. Baron casually "I just wish to test your new general.' Gosh that was funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You can learn a lot with kung fu movies, and it seems that Haru has a good reason to learn. |