Ok. I'll admit I didn't particularly enjoy the way you characterized Hermione, but I still enjoyed the idea of this fic. Oh, and also, you do know Hermione can use a glamour charm, right?

Alright. I'm going to be honest. I enjoyed the content, but Hermione seemed too OOC.

You have done a great disservice to JK Rowling with this portrayal of Hermione. You've done a disservice to women with this portrayal of Hermione.

Hermione has zero agency in this fic. She barely exists to let Blaise do whatever the fuck he wants. Write women better.

Damn, I just ... really love Blaise. And his attitude and everything. The story is beautiful to read yet it made me want to cry.

I really enjoyed reading this story! The first chapter really drew me in..who can resist the sexy and persistent Blaise? It was also great to see the journey that Blaise had to take in order to figure out his own feelings. Thanks for sharing with us _

Great work! I'm glad I stumbled upon this. I normally only read stories for which the status is marked as "complete" (this one is still "in progress").

If Hermione has read so many books on pregnancy etc, why does she not know babies often come early and to have a hospital bag packed three or four weeks in advance? That seems a bit of a slip for Hermione, especially because it is something cited everywhere.

It's annoying me a little how Hermione knows nothing about being pregnant. She could still avert suspicion by taking sips of alcohol. She needn't not take a single sip just because she's pregnant. And that's without magic being able to help her with Concealing charms.

Can I just ask why Blaise always seems to use lube when they have sex? Surely if Hermione was ready for him, she would be wet enough to take him? Or are they just impatient people? Also, why use a condom when she's already pregnant?

"Maybe he's fucking his tailor. It would explain his clothes."

*giggles* ;)

Great story! The ending was simply perfect with them all happy together and their son was absolutely adorable as well. I'm really glad that they finally worked out all their past issues too - even Blaise' bitch of a mother :-)

I did feel bad for Hermione for how horrible Blaise was acting half the time though... He really was an absolute git with how he treated her, but at least he changed and took responsibility by the end.

Anyways, thanks for writing!

Aww cute story. I think I like Zabini now. :O I'm going to go try some more stories with him and Hermione 3

Thanks for writing. Cute plot.

How cut and dry.

How will Georgiana handle this?