Very good,i wasn't expecting that at all!

Woooaaahhh, plot twist! Haha, this made me laugh really hard... poor Johnny! Great job :)

like!

That would be so incredibly awkward, incredibly weird, and more than a bit creepy.

Haha! It's thrilling at the beginning 'cause you want to know whats going on and so hilarious at the end! I love it! ... Poor Johnny though... -w-

Oh my word, I read this at 3 am last night, and I nearly DIED I was laughing so hard. Oooh my goodness that was the funniest thing I think I've ever read.

Lol! I love how you think it's properly horrifying until the reveal, fantastic!

:D

Great fic!

Oh Man! You Cheeky Little Monkey! I thought Johnny was having nightmares about all the world ending that the Surfer did or something! And he was having dreams about Sue! LOL.

Love this story. So funny and creative, yet you still managed to throw in a tortured Johnny. Excellent work! :D

hahaha this story cracked me up. I loved it

God, I haven't stopped laughing! That was perfect...I particularly liked,

"In … that way? And Johnny?...”

“Yes.”

“Saw?”

“Sure did.”

“Oh God.”

Amplified the entire story in a few short lines. I think this is one of my favorites! Absolutely loved it.

ROTFLMAO! I was really expecting something so angsty, but the last part made me crack up! Poor Johnny! :D

lol. And here I thought it was going to be angst ... boy was I wrong. I was so not expecting that. Love work!

Yes, this story was published ages ago, but it is HILARIOUS, so I have no choice but to review it. All the characters are written brilliantly, particularly (of course) Johnny!

Poor Johnny...that would have been fairly traumatic for him...but incredibly amusing for everybody else! The whole scene in the lab was great; I especially loved Johnny's babbling, and Ben's line to him:

“I’m sorry Matchstick, really, it must have been terrible. Genuinely, horribly terrible, but it’s also funny as hell,” Ben continued, being somewhat sincere, but also amused.

I always love any Johnny/Ben interaction; they're very funny together. :) Wow, I really think this is one of the funniest fanfics I've ever read! It is on my favourites list forevermore! The only sad part was that there was no follow-up, like what happened when Reed found the cure or something, but as I'm currently loving your other Fantastic 4 story as well, it doesn't matter! Great work!