I loved the ending tying in to Hades and Persephone as a couple, as I’ve read Percy Jackson I think it’s quite cute and your type of writer is quite amazing, also I loved the Beatles references

I love how she's provoking him. Your OC has got just the right personnality to drive him mad and I really enjoyed reading their fights.
Of course, you are right, Lupin's nose is a werewolf nose. He knows from the beggining. That makes sense.
She does not love him ? How is it even possible not to love that man ?
That was a very enjoyable fic to read. I think your Sev is mostly in character. I ould simply decrease a bit the list of qualities of your OC.

The conversation between Lupin et Severus is sheer perfection. Made me giggle in front of my computer.

"And after serving two sides of a major war simultaneously, ..." Excellent thinking, professor !

Wow, I'm impressed with the boldness of your OC ! Perfect use of Muffliato. You know the spells well.

I like that most of your story is about their detailed thoughts. Quite interesting.
Rhaaa ! Sev, behave, she's a student for Merlin sake ! Lol !

Sev listing several times Cupris's qualities is too much, imo. The same goes for the scene when she meets Decoste and he's is invisible and wants to defend her.
But I like that he refuses his attraction for her and gets angry. Losing a bit of his self control and focus must be unbearable for him.
Your OC is almost a Mary Sue : pretty, curvy, beautiful thick hair, striking eyes, intelligent, witty, sings like a bird, talented at potions, boys fancy her... too much ! Maybe some of these should be suppressed to make her more realistic or maybe just insisting less on her beauty and supernatural eyes.

Tripping is a very, very classical scene in romance but why not.

I love it when she thinks "he's so sexy when he insults people" or things like that ! I feel the same !
I had a good laugh with this chapter. An amoeba ! Lol !

It seems very unlikely to me that Sev would toy with someone's feelings...

I really like the way you use Sev in the first three chapters, his thoughts and words. Quite realistic and he's a very difficult character to use, in my opinion.
On the other hand, repeating the color of their eyes and hair is unnecessary and has a Mary Sue feeling in it, I think.

I like your writing style. Very detailed.
I would have liked to know how Sev survived Nagini's bite. Nevertheless, it's an interesting choice of setting, after his death.
It seems strange that Sev and Cupris did not know each other. She should have had him as a professor since first year of class, shouldn't she ?

I really enjoyed this story, the highlight for me was Lupins involvement, as he ended up really adding to the story instead of just being there for the sake of it. And I'm not ashamed to let you know that the conversation between Lupin and Sasha in the final chapter made me rather emotional in the most beautiful of ways.

I cannot congratulate the author more on this, especially being the first fanfiction written (of hopefully many more) as it was a wonderful read.

Lovely story!

That's not fair Snape. Criticising someone for making a perfect potion when you KNOW you gave the wrong instructions on the board! How are they expected to learn how to make potions. Dumbles is long gone and you no longer need to dumb down the potions curriculum.