I think I will say 'yerp' like Albus instead of 'here' when the substitute calls roll lol

probs best that her 1st real intro to the weasleys was with percy since George didn't really count cuz he was working at the time

This story is really nice. I reall liked it .

Lilly's middle name is Luna, not Molly

DEnnis creevy...awesome!its a great chapter!

That actually makes me really sad that you're going to re write this story because of how well I felt it was written. I loved the haphazard style of this. I fell that you have captured the nature of the wizarding world, as well as the essence of family life (particularly of the Weasley 's large family), and accurately depicts an outsider's perspective to this absolutely enormous eccentric family and their messy lives. Coming from a large family myself, and understanding the potterverse as I do, I think this was rather masterfully written, especially compared to some of the other works we see here. Regardless, I look forward to seeing what you will do, if you do continue this.

You should keep the same name for a character through the whole story. Was Dudley's wife's name Mary or Margret? It went back and forth so many times. Very annoying.

CADOGAN! hahah! im so proud that i understood that crazy knight reference! hehehe very well done, very well done indeed! okay, so for the past couple of days, ive been reading up as fun HP fanfic as I could get my hands on though I didnt bother with most of them (Some are truly appalling) and then I stumbled onto yours, and I thought..."Hmmm, wizard son of Dudley? sounds quite promising" AND IT WAS! Let me commend you on your writing! and also, let me take a moment to comment, no applaud, your correct use of the word "bloody" in a sentence. Like I said, ive been reading lots of fanfic and no one...NO ONE has properly used the darn word! So thank you, I swear, American writers need a crash course in British Speech before attempting to work off a brilliant classic. Honestly, the only critique I have is perhaps throwing in more names, I get confused sometimes when there is no so and so said, "blah blah blah" or theres a random "Dad" "Mom" and "my uncle" thrown into one of those unclaimed statements. And of course, I'm a wicked stickler for details, so send us into sensory overload! ;) But other than that, Grade A! Keep up the good work.

wait.. in this chapter, charlie's wife is named melanie, but in the next, she's nairi? O_o;; #confunded.

also, norbert's actually norberta.

Hey there!

Anyway, I just started reading your story and I find the central idea very entertaining-what would happen if Dudley's kid had magic. It's very nice to see some originality in fanfic. However, I also wanted to comment on the writing style-most of your dialogue is written in without mentioning who said what, and it's a little bit unclear about who is speaking. I do realize that you wrote this story b/w '07 - '09, but just in case you do still check reviews, I thought I'd drop a comment. :]

NO WAY. DURSLEY-CREEVEY MARRIAGE? What?

I read the other one and I have to say I prefer this one. its funnier

Can I beta your story? There does seem to be a few problems here.

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I loved it! :) u should wright a sequal.