The ending seems rather abrupt. It lacks closure. There needs to be some reconciliation between the two. But thank you for writing this

Your grammar is beyond appalling, and your writing style leaves so very much to be desired. One can barely get the gist of the story with your lilting words and horrific presentation. Ugh, absolutely pathetic drivel, although I imagine it would be better written by...anyone but you.

this was quite adorable, especially the ending :-)

I concur with the other reviewers. The story is written in a very original style, beautiful and I would have very much liked an epilogue.

This story is wonderful! The writing style is very interesting, the story is so fresh and unexpected... I loved it! A real treat. It made me happy! :-)

i really like this fic! i wish it had a epilogue. i didn't want it to end.

aw! The end was brilliant ;)

In fact, I really liked your story (plot and writing style).

I especially appreciate it not having a lot of spelling mistakes...that's always very annoying to read ;)

Keep up the good work.

Interesting style. I kind of like it, although I have no idea why.

I absolutely loved this story. You capture all the characters voices so well. By the end, I was yelling at my computer screen.

PLEASE write a sequel.

I really like your writing style. I hope you will publish more HP/SS fics in the future!

It was a cute idea. Although the way you wrote it got a bit confusing at time -mainly because I couldn't, right away, tell who was currently speaking- with was still well done.

I loved the plot. There should be a sort of... One shot sequel, or something of the sort. At least I'd be interested in Severus' reaction to Harry finding him.

Otherwise you choose a nice spot to end the story otherwise. Only minor grammar and spelling errors were present. You could use a beta or such to have it cleared up but other than that you did a fabulous job.

Thank you for writing this. :]

i have one major probablem with this story...hermione is spelled wrong. multiple time you have "hermiony."

I liked the story. The idea that Snape breaks the regulations to help Harry with something like that is great and also how Harry hopefully finds him again is good. Is there maybe a sequel?

loved it! very well done!

Missy

Very well written and enjoyable! You could use a beta however, to clean up the English just a bit. Usually it's not too bad, but some things like "stubbed" when it should be "stabbed," or "live" when I'm pretty sure you mean "life" and similar things like that. The stubbed and stabbed one was sort of funny. You might "stub" your toe when you trip, but no one gets "stubbed" with a knife, or if they do, they'd never end up in the hospital! :D