Great story! I'm glad everything worked out, and I liked the reveal.

This was a great story thank you for writing it.

Cute tale

I actually find your portray of a realtionship between lois and clark pretty realistic. I mean apart from the whole fictional stuff.
The ending was pretty funny and that was really nice because the beginning hasn't had much to laugh about...

That was quick but I was surprised from the begging how long the chapters were. At least the first chapter anyway. I liked it though, very nice. Especially the part when Lois learns Superman's identity. It was good, I really liked that. Good work.
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I LOVE this story! You did such a terrific job - it was really a pleasure to read!

lol, the banter! SOOOO much fun this chapter!

LOL! This chapter was sooooo awesome! I LOVED the confrontation, and that Clark actually got flustered and blurted out his stupid stupid (probably well-founded) fears. SQUEEEEEEEEE

Oh Clark, you big dumb alien!

Martha Kent, keep being awesome!

Jason FTW!

Goddammit Clark! What the very real fuck are you doing? This paternalistic bullshit is so tired and I really wish Lois would just slap the shit outta him sometimes! For reals, all this noble bullshit would drive me round the bend...

*ahem* Excellent fic. I evidently have ~feelings~ about it...

Just perfect... the conversations, the whole story, the writing style... I just love it :)

So, the things I love about this story: it fixes the parts of the movie that drive me crazy; you always manage to write the characters in such a way that I just love reading and re-reading the dialogue; and, I just love the mushiness in places. It makes the inner reader who wants WAFF/happy endings all giddy. Jason is just seriously adorable and Martha is just lovely. I could ramble on about just the magic of how you write Lois/Clark, but I don’t know how to do it without getting repetitive. Just so much love.

I love this. It was wonderfully heart breaking. Gosh i sound like a sadist. Yesyes. I have been and still are enamoured by the Clark-Lois-Superman love triangle. And I thought you captured that wonderfully. I just looked at the published date and realised that I'm actually 4 years late but, Oh well, if you are reading this, Thank you for writing such a lovely fic.

That was brilliant, I loved it! I had no problem visualising everything you'd written, it was pure gold. :)

BEST EVER Superman fic! You are a great writer, and you have an incredible way with words. You win me over with your story, and I hope you keep doing this. Now I'm off to read your other stories. Congrats!