OH MY GOD. That was so beautifully written 3

This really made me like Narcissa. Way to go you!

Great fic

That's a brilliant little story. You're a star!

Aw! The end was cute, thought the Lord is a great madman. I liked your story!

That was brilliant. This is such a perceptive and intriguing story. I enjoyed the way the events that spawned the scene are covered thoroughly enough in discussion and narrative to understand it all, but simply enough not to be too graphic disrupt the pace.

I consider these thee to be some of the most interesting and strongest characters of the series, and I was very pleased with how they were written here. The concepts are heartbreaking and gripping. I also liked the way everyone stayed in-character throughout the whole scenes.

The ending was excellent. Well done.

that was brilliant. Narcissa has so much potential, you should think about adding another chapter. I would love to hear that conversation btwn her and Snape.

Snape still in character too. really good

For being such a short fic, this had a lot wonderful detail. You did it really well and loved that it was form Narcissa's point of view. _

Wow, that was good. Poor Remus... but at least Sev made him feel better. And Narcissa was actually likeable in this, I raraely read stories with that occurence, Good One Shot :)

This was well-written, bravo for that. The torture Voldemort inflicted on Lupin...that was terrible. Poor Narcissa, I'm glad she was able to see past the act and understand that Lupin had no control over his body.

I was touched by this story. I especially Remus's "I have always feared what the wolf would do, but I never ... I never feared being a man." So perceptive. I liked!

I like! Go Narcissa!

cya

DK