| Reviews for Best Kept Secret |
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   lara5170 chapter 3 . 5/11 It's been 7 years and Rin is only 8? That math doesn't make sense. Kagome seemed completely fine and accepting within minutes of finding out she was a youkai while they didn't actually give her any real knowledge or tell her what type of youkai they are. When did she ever get training and if she's a youkai why and how is she also a miko? Does Shippo know what she is? |
| lara5170 chapter 2 . 5/11 At this point Inuyasha is having a relationship with a dead person in a false body and why would Kikyo cook when she doesn't need to eat? |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/23 Thanks can't wait for more |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/22 I think is really good Kagome as a youkai and Sesshie Will soon fall madly in love with her |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/22 Thanks for this wonderful reading |
| TaxLady0415 chapter 4 . 4/23 I am really enjoying your story. |
| drkness-consumed chapter 9 . 4/8/2017 There is a lot of unnecessarily repetition in some parts and other parts are lacking in details. Some times there are parts that seem cut and dry and leave an almost lack in taste and leave me wanting for more. Double check spelling and grammar while you're writing. Great story! Cannot wait to read more! |
| Faery66 chapter 24 . 9/26/2016 Hope to read more soon. D |
| Sesshomaru2004 chapter 24 . 8/11/2015 this is coming along great. please keep it up. |
| MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 24 . 7/31/2015 this s getting deadly I love it |
| Ree-san chapter 6 . 7/31/2015 I'm not understanding Kagome's reaction. She acknowledged that he's trying to protect her while waiting for her father, but still behaves that way? Even after reading her thoughts it seems like something is missing to justify her behavior. If she got out of the room where would she go? Why would she want to leave if he's expecting her father to arrive? She just seems very irrational and somewhat childish in a pre-teen sort of way. Other than that, I'm looking forward to what you do with the plot. It's very interesting. |
| cherryblossm chapter 23 . 7/29/2015 i love it and can not wait for the next chapter to be posted hope it is soon |
| SapphireKageKyuura chapter 3 . 4/24/2015 It's spelled submit. So far I'm liking it. I will continue reading it. Sesshomaru sure is a pompous ass isn't he? LOLZ :P |
| AkaNeko-Sesshy chapter 22 . 2/3/2014 Yay |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/26/2013 your spelling and grammar is very confusing, but I still like the concept/plot of the story so far. I think that you should either read over your chapter after you have finish writing it or right after you post it so you can see if it flows fluently. I'm not 'flaming' you just trying to give some creative criticism. |
