That was actually pretty good

an emotional roller coaster wow

A well constructed story

This is probably one of the few perfectly executed fanfictions I've read on this site. Now in my top 5. Please write the sequel. To good to contain! :)

THE FEELS! ARG!

beautiful sequel please and if there is would you mind telling me what it is

Yep definitely a classic! Hope the govt gets their butt kicked (like Simmons "disappears" along with copies of the files). LOL!

I enjoyed reading your story!

This is a wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing it!

Wow. O.O

Stories like these are almost rare nowadays.

This, that has a plot, a nice, defined main character, and a conflict the author (believably) prompts, something besides "Oh no! It's the Decepticons!" In a lot of other fanfiction, the miracle (an organic turning into a bot, a technorganic, etc.) usually goes unexplained and weird. Convenient. (She just happened to be the reincarnation of the AllSpark? Uh huh.) This...is not like that. This has a planned out explanation which has been included in the story and has its own category of story. Plus, it's got style.

Now that's an ending. Happy, yet cliffhangerish at the same time, able to make a sequel easily possible.

All of which make for one awesome story.

Super awesome! I loved the whole story. -

Loved this!

An incredible story. I enjoyed every moment.

Great story! Sad that Sam sort of ceased to exist. Simmons etter go away for life!

So lovely. So nice. So cute. So sad. OMG, there's not enough words for this story! It's epic! XD