I'm not crying you are

Aww. That was ridiculously sweet and awesome and real.

This is great. There are very few stories that manage to deal with Sarah, and you did it well, and then you actually let David have a life, and you even dealt with the pain of losing that... it's so rare. And you never backed away from the pain. Thank you.

I'm going to go read BBE now- so I imagine the world won't hear from me for some time. :) I'll read it offline but I'll try to review soon.

*sigh* I love it when you write Javid. Or anything at all, really.

There was no tired Javid here. This was a new and refreshing look at Jack and David.

Very interesting style.

Beautifully written and deeply emotional.