| Reviews for Demands, Terms and Understanding |
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  Golden-Heart chapter 1 . 9/28/2009 I love Optimus Prime, too! He is so incredible, noble, heroic, Christlike, caring,... I was LOLing when Prime tells the Secretary of Defense informs Lennox that he is to take of the Autobots, and William responds that he's going to be a babysitter! Ha ha ha! Though Keller's admonition makes sense: Lennox is the only one who has been intimitely involved with them. I wish Jon Voight had reprised his role... I liked Keller. The last line really stays with you... |
 Biologs07 chapter 1 . 5/27/2008 Awesome story! |
| ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 5/23/2008 I have to agree. Optimus Prime is LOVE! - *hugs* |
| Eerie Iri chapter 1 . 4/13/2008 This is a totally awesome story! |
| Atiaran chapter 1 . 12/26/2007 This is good. It's very realistic and demonstrates a good characterization of both SECDEF Keller and Optimus Prime. Your description of the Lennox family home was a good bit of scene setting-enough to give us a backdrop but not enough to get in the way. I enjoyed the careful conversation between Prime and Keller, with the two of them feeling each other out and coming to a grudging respect by the end of the story, and got a good sense of the warmth and friendship that grew between them. It matched perfectly the tone of the movie and I wish this scene had been included in the film. Good job. |
| SkyHighFan chapter 1 . 10/31/2007 Simmons as a driver? I like that but I think he should have a more suitable job than that... say garbage pickup? |
| The Moonless Night chapter 1 . 8/2/2007 Interesting point that I am now wishing the movie had covered. ... ... ... You have spawned a plot bunny. Thank you! _ **runs off to type** |
| lazy-bones-the-dragon chapter 1 . 7/30/2007 At least Keller is a reasonable man, good work. |
| Riana1 chapter 1 . 7/30/2007 You are brillant. This is one of those plotty scenes I wish was in the movie like whether Sam's parents meet the Autobots etc. But not many people do them- kudos for being so orginal. |
| Fire From Above chapter 1 . 7/29/2007 Good story. |
| Lil Angel chapter 1 . 7/29/2007 Wow awesome dude! John understand the Transformers! Good story! |
| Ted chapter 1 . 7/29/2007 The tension in this was very real. Well done! |
| Red Leader chapter 1 . 7/29/2007 Me grimlock want more. Me grimlock like. |
| green-eyed-bastard chapter 1 . 7/29/2007 Very well done story. The characterization of Keller was quite good. Shows just how much intestinal fortitude he has when it comes to dealing with 'people' who are older than the human race and able to ...well...squish him. |
| Shadows Light chapter 1 . 7/29/2007 Very good! I enjoyed this :) |
