I don't know why so many good reviews. It's chaotic and unpleasant to read. Childish and Cringy. I usually read to the end of story, but in this case, waste of time. I wish I didn't.

Such a raw and real story filled with twists, turns, and heart wrenching events. Very well done fanfic that I cannot wait to find out what happens next. I am especially worried about the fate of little Devon and Heero. My heart goes out to little Devon. It's just inconceivable that they would be tortured any more than they already have.

omgomgomg.

I seriously have been watching you since you first made your website all those years ago. Blue Seed, Gundam Wing. You're fanfiction is the REASON I started writing! Now I've gone on to write my own fiction, fan and orginal. I now have my own following, but I just wanted to comment on the very frist fanfiction I ever read. I just wanted you to know that there are those of us who still love you and your writing, who have loved you and have never forgotten you. Thank you so much for leading me into this life! I would not be who I am today without you!

When in the world are you going to finish this story? I have been waiting on the edge of my seat for nearly a year! That's not even half as long as all your other fans have had to wait! Please please please finish this story! I'm begging here! Good luck with all of your other projects too!

you should still update this

cuz i really, REALLY want to know what happens next

Please keep going with the story. I first read this story on your Temple Website and fell in love with it automaticly. You give the characters the feelings and bring them out on more than just the page. I really wish that you would not delete it, for it is awesome! You could have been on the original story board for the Gundam wing series with how you write and stay so close to the character's real thoughts. PLEASE finish! I wish, as do many others, want to know what will happen with Relena, Heero and the others!

Shorty

well, i love this and it really holds me in. I cant pull away from it. I really wish you would update though since i noticed that its been four years since you last updated. Since its almost finished, it sucks that you left it so soon. Please dont give up on this story. its awesome.

Ymir-chan

Amazingly good story. Please don't kill Devon. I can't wait to see more.

this is a really good story! So. Sad. I hope at least some of it turns out happily! I can't wait to read more..

wher's the next chap

want to read more...

continue, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please...

Please continue this so wonderful!

Wonderful, Stunning, WHERE'S THE BUTTON FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE? *quietly cry in a corner* Loved it anyways!

Dude, why haven't you updated yet? this fic is awesum its my favourite, and i've been waiting years for u to update! PLEASE!

this story is great so far and i am very supprised that Mrs. Dorlan is the enemy.i am still a little confused about relena's dreams, i am glad that pagan gave us all of the info on ERIS

and i hope that relena soon gets the message that heero gave mia.

O_O you stopped? Why? I want to see how this ends so that means perfectly well you need to finish what you started in 20. Yes this is now 2004, so please continue! Please!

I loved the story...what's here...all the characters were perfectly cool, especially Relena and Heero. Well, tootals.