| Reviews for Twentythirds |
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Guest chapter 1 . 3/9 Wow... I really liked it. |
nutellahoe chapter 1 . 11/20/2018 God beautiful story! |
Wfest chapter 1 . 12/19/2017 Wow... that was intense. Amazing piece. |
JeslynBoo chapter 1 . 3/19/2017 Wow. {blinks} That feels... way too possible. They could be so much more, have so much more, if Sasuke thought he deserved to be happy. Or was willing to try, anyway. |
slantways chapter 1 . 1/25/2017 :o |
Celebrindal01 chapter 1 . 2/16/2016 Waouw, again, I'm in awe for your work! It resumes perfectly their relation, I think. He has to have strong feelings for Naruto, from forever, but, being who he is, he will never admit it and always make it so complicated! It's so obvious, they way he is jealous, why doesn't he just go with it? (I'm mainly saying Sasuke is stupid, but everybody knows that! ahah) And Naruto, dear him, never gives up, and maybe, now, he'll finally catch Sasuke for good! (I love the meaning of Konosuke's name) |
Hallelujah It's Food chapter 1 . 2/9/2016 OH MY GOD ITS SO BEAUTIFUL AAAAA |
NecromanticHarbinger chapter 1 . 2/11/2015 Read this a long time ago when I had no account. Had to come back and provide as much goddamn support for it as I could. Good god I love this. So much. That description, that plot, those feels! Amazing. Simply... amazing. |
Coulorless Rainbow chapter 1 . 12/27/2013 ».« why you no continue this?! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2013 Why don't Sasuke just come back already? |
Kagome Juh chapter 1 . 10/27/2013 Oh well, now I'm depressed. Angst do this to me every single time, it's frustrating. I feel betrayed too, can you believe it? Imagining Naruto married to Sakura, of all the people, while loving and meeting Sasuke and having Sakura's CHILD? (Naruto loved her too then, in another way, but he DID, and that's fucking depressing to think about, because she never loved him like she loved Sasuke and they were together, having sex or even making love, while Sasuke was out there making who knows what - creating his network, we can see at the end - thinking about and longing for his birthday when he would meet the love of his life again, only hearing about all the dreams that Naruto was completing and the FAMILY he was creating - something Sasuke didn't remember what feels like to have, at all - and feeling betrayed and hopeless because he couldn't come back yet... Oh well. Depressing. Frustating. Infuriating! Why should be Sakura of all the people? Why did he get married? I can't be understandable at all when, even if his side of life needed the marriage and the child and all this bullshit, Sasukes's side of life was... only him, pratically. Ugh, I hate when all this feelings make me choose a side, because I know things are not that simple) I've never liked Sasuke, but then I started to read all SasukexNaruto good fics here in the site and I was like 'OMG THEY ARE ONE OF MY OTPS!' and now, when I read this kind of plot, my heart breaks in million pieces with the unfairness of it all. Naruto is my favorite of the manga, and here I feel like murdering him lol Oh God, this fic is awesome. Sad. Fucking depressing, let me give it emphasis. It fucking hurts my Sasu&Naru heart to read, ugh. You did a great job :D |
enzhe chapter 1 . 10/11/2013 This. This is amazing. This is perfect. This ended a drought of decent fan fiction in my life. This goes not only on my favorites list, but on my personal "yes this is worth every rereading you chance to have time for" list. Thank you so much for this creation. |
cellaria chapter 1 . 9/15/2013 this was good..very believable & well written. i liked konosuke & that sakura was dead but it didn't make any sense that naruto 'had to get married' in the first place.. it's not like tsunade was ever married & they really can't 'make' him do anything. i also think it would've been much better if you showed the rest of the last night spent together..since it needed more sex. then instead of sasuke having given him the note before he should've have given it to him then. he should have said he set up the network & had been gathering information over the last few years so that he would have enough to give to the leaf to be worth his pardon should he decide to come back or whatever, then you showed them together & sasuke staying. though really.. naruto is the hokage sasuke doesn't need to sneak around anymore nor do anything besides decide he wants to stay lol |
Yaoi Trash Master chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 ...MY TEARS ARENT STOPPING ;A; THEIR LOVE IS SO...IFUGEIPFUHFI3UJ |
Mahayana chapter 1 . 5/2/2013 That... was absolutely stunning. The writing, the character development, the sheer depth of emotion... and the smut too... it was all so very well done I don't even have the words for it. You have Naruto and Sasuke's personalities down pat, and I think this is the only OC Naruto kid that I actually DON'T mind or find annoying. That's a feat. (Kohosuke is adorable and has a good daddy. 3) Seeing their progression and the changes as Naruto and Sasuke age was very touching. And the ending... was brilliant. I was sure this would end up in tragedy somehow, I couldn't see how it could possibly end happily... without Naruto or Sasuke going terribly mushy or out of character that is... But that you managed it, and the ending was fitting and believable. I applaud you madame. You're a genius for having woven this story so well. A genius I say. Give yourself a pat on the back, because you deserve it. Thank you for writing this, it made my day reading it. |