Awesome work! I really hope Ed and Rei get back together soon. Or that Elliot grows a set and asks for help with the hommonculi...

Plz Plz write more ... I just read the two story's today and lie them ! You need to write more really ! And my thoughts are rei and Ed get hooked up again and it's sooo sad that she had a miscarriage and Ed never knew he was goin to be a. Dad and Elliot needs to tell Ed and rei so hy can help him get his sister back and let Ed and rei back together ! And the final note this is the first story where I like a persons character that's been made up sooooooooooo you CANT STOP WRITING YHIS STORY ! More Plz

Please continue and please make Ed and Rei get back together soon!

I've renewed my fascination with this story! Great chapter! Keep up the good work.

wow!Poor ed! he's so heatbroken * cries* grr elliot i don't care if u trying to save ur sis no one does that to ed! lol anyway its really good please update

loves it and the scenes switched moderately..not too fast...so it was easy to follow

muhaha, you have to love mustang, lol. I do have to say, that was a good little bit of a twist to put in there, it wasn't expected and helped move the story along well. I really like this story, keep on writing, your really good at it

Pleeeeaaase put up another chapter! This arc just oozes drama!

Omg I love your stories! You've improved so much in your wrightin update asap! I wanna know what happens next! :D

Totally awesome story. :D

Keep it up.

Hope to read more soon.

OMG this story makes me want to cry *sniff* all the emotion, love, jealosy, and ED-ness *sniff* *holds hands together up to her face with shines in her eyes and backround* i just...just...dont even know how to are doing a good flipplin job on this story i really really really want you to finish it *goes on her knees with hands in her hand up to her face* IM BEGING YOU! PLEASE FINISH IT!

yay, a review for you so you can update! I really like your story, and your one that came before, your a really good writer. I love how you have kept the stuff out of FMA, and also added your own things and changed somethings, yet it all works out well together, and seems like it should be a part of the series. Well, the first two seasons anyway, i refuse to watch brotherhood, the artist is different, ed's face looks funny to me, and some things are off in the design, it drives me nuts ;p . ANYWAY (sorry, im hyper, ive had cookies...) keep on writing and updating, i cant wait to read more!

Cute story...Kinda depressing though...Elliot's kinda...neeaah in my view...I mean, he loves Rei and doesn't want her to get hurt but he also loves his sister which the Homunculus currently have...they obviously want Ed for something. And if they do get him Rei will be hurt and all that stuff...buh I'm on a rant! I'm so sorry 'bout the fact that ya had to listen (or read) me ranting about this...ANYWAY y'all better have the next chapter up soon or I'll eat all your delicious cupcakes that I made.

Peace love and pocky,

Crackers!

i understand elliot...but i still dont like him for stealing Rei away from ed plus he'd betray her for his sister...who's prbabaly dead..

GOD DAMN I HATE WHINRY...she said the exact opposite of what Hawkeye and Mustang told Ed...I hate her...so deeply...i want to...throw her of the eiffel tower and then put her in a mixer and then a meat grinding machine...then let barry the chopper chop her little pieces even more...(my imagination got outta hand) WHINRY IS RUINING REIxED..she a bitch