Chapter 5 is 'On the Way' huh? Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaase update cause it's a great story and I would love to read more

Please update this! I know there is a little chance since you haven't for 10 years, but I would really like to know what happens next!

Where is the chapter

What is going to happen to harlock

Interesting very interesting

Please,
Tell us you haven't given up on this fic and that chapter 5 is on its way...

omg i love this story! i am really wanting to know what happened to our dear captain. please make another chaphter soon because this story is awsome. :P

This feels like an episode. Continue please

Hullo...

This is a review for chapter four...but it really covers the whole storyline to date.

First, nice job on the portrayals of Harlock, Tochiro, and Kei Yuki. I absolutely HATE Councilman Goodman and the Matron and their bizarre P.R.O.G.R.A.M. I hope Harlock can and will break the attempt to condition him and get off the colony world and back to the Arcadia.

Please write more and post when you can. Looking forward to it, and will probably attempt my own Harlock fic at some point, too. The Good Captain has shown up now and again in my massive alternate version of the Yamato/Star Blazers-verse...which I still consider Leijiverse, naturally...

Hope to see this tale continued; nice job, and kampai!

I just read all four chapters and I can't wait for the rest of your story...:)

Hi! I hope you are eventually going to continue this fanfic for it is a great start. Why did Harlock tell them to await 30 days to come and get him back? What does he know that no one else does? Why is it important to him to do so? why is he wounded? I liked the start and the first few chapters very much. sigh. It seems that since the good Captain doesn't have anything new out, that everyone has forgotten him!

I keep rereading this story and every time I do I get more and more courios to whats gonna happen next. I hope you havet given up in this one.

Please keep adding on to the story I ABSOLUTLY love it and there arent that many ongoing Captain Harlock fanfics around

This is brilliant. Believe me as I am super critical of anything related to our great Captain. (Been a follower for 17 years!)

Your writing is captivating. You are bringing both the scenes and the characters alive very realistically. Which is quite a feat for on the one hand you have to maintain the characters we know so well and on the other create completely new ones and place them in convincing new environments. The Matron is supberb as is the world in which you have set her.

I particularly like Goodman's speech to the council too - you even had me convinced of the logic in the P.R.O.G.R.A.M.! This is SO important for a lot of storytelling falls flat on its dialogue - but yours is strong and evocative.

But don't rush your writing - like you say take your time and work each chapter out. And DON'T WORRY about continuity! It practically does not exist in the Matsumoto universe! So just enjoy yourself. I am.

My only comment is (yes its picky) but watch your spelling and the occasional word that strays out of context. This is so good I don't want petty syntax to spoil it.

Needless to say I am very keen to see how our Captain handles this and - like I am sure all of us reading this - have my heart in my throat for what might happen to him!

Happy writing.

K

Oh would you please go on?

I don't wanna appear addicted but...

Gimme sth to read! OO