Oh...now I'm getting really interested. I can now officially say you have to keep going with this. Mal killed Inara? And if Simon and Kaylee are turning all of them, I want to know what happened to the rest, and what originally happened to Simon, of course. So much to explore, and yet such short chapters, lol! Keep posting!

Love,

Sky

This chapter was short, but sweet. Still a little confused about how Simon first became a vampire, but I figured you will tell us in time. You taking your time is only adding to my excitement about this fic. P.S. I love the idea of a bouncy vampire Kaylee. Adorable!

Loved it. Interesting story. x

Just read this story and it's great! I'm so liking vampire Simon, especially when he hit Mal, that must have surprised the Captain! Excited to read more of this fic!

interesting. I was skeptical at first, but now I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Still interested...still interesting...keep going, lol...still need more info. :~)

Happy Writing,

Sky

i'm really glad you decided to keep going with this fic. This chapter only adds to my excitement about the fic. And hearing that Mal was a vampire prince. How hot.

Hey! I haven't read your story yet, but I'm sure they're great. They always are. I just thought I'd drop by.

I like the idea of this fic. Keep it going.

i really like it so far.

i really want to see where

this goes cuz it sounds really

interesting. haha im really excited

for the next chapter! and i want to

know how river and mal ended up vampires!

and jayne a wolf? eh.. i guess it does

fit him! haha! any way its sounds really

good so far! keep up the great work!

-kk

Interesting...definately interesting. I kinda like it...the idea is intriguing, and I think it could go one of two ways - really really really awesome, or really really really bad. There's not so much of an inbetween on this one. So far, I like it...I'm still curious as to exactly what you plan on doing, but I truly want to see more. PLEASE! :~)

The only small slip I see is the dialogue. Mal's voice is typically a bit more...well, it's just Mal, lol, and you're doing a good job, I would just put a bit more of a colloquial twang on it. Otherwise, I truly am interested. Mostly in seeing what you can do with this. :~) Good luck!

Sky

I like this. There's something about it that is ...I can't quite put my finger on it, but I definately dig it. I hope to see more of it.

The one thing that only was a bit off was the dialect, but you got it almost. I still think it was very good.