Brilliant!

The adventures of Rob and Katie were hilarious! I seriously thought Lois might kill her. If she explained it to the judge, she'd get off.

And the ending... perfect.

Surprised that it came from Lana, but it worked.

Really, really cool...

This story is amazing! Katie and Rob are so funny! And they helped a lot :)

I like the idea of Clark and Lois preteding to be a married couple! They are so cute together! Here are two moments that impressed me the most:

1. The wedding. Lois in a dress :) And it was hilarious that everybody found out about the wedding with a help of Martha! :)

2. The last scene with the wedding video! It was impossible for me to stop laughing! :)

I love you writing style. You are expressing a lot af different feelings, emotions and events with bright and understandable words!

Thanks for writing it!

Sourire.

Great Story again. Keep up the good work.

This is excellent! I enjoyed it very much. I love the ending, "not quite now but soon". I suppose I can wait. Great job! But continue on, I can't wait for more. :D

This story is really interesting, my favorite in he trilogy!

hahahahahahaha that was awesome

LOL! that was so funny! Great job! :)

Wow! That was great! I hope you do a sequel! And I think that Lois wants one of thoses kisses from her farm boy! LOL! Your a great writer, so keep writing stories! :)

Great story just wish that you could of kept them married. Hopefuly you are going to plan the next story around them. I like the way in which you write and they way you tell the story... Keep it up looking forward to more of this...

Thanks.

Take Care,

Jack

yep, that is so true clark!

what a lovely ending

thank you for sharing such a wonderfully funny story with us.

nice ending to a good story and totally funny loved it

That was a great ending. I had a good laugh when Chloe told Lois that it is on youtube.

Great last two sentences!

LOVED the end! awesome story! :D

nice. i hope you write another one