The writing is breathe taking, the originality of this fanfic is mind blowing. I don’t know what to say really but it’s been awhile since I was reeled in and everything about this fanfic is just so good that I can’t even. My heart ached and I rooted for the characters, istg i’m in disbelief with all of my feelings rnkcgofjdjahwhhde masterpiece

Love it

Interesting!
Maybe a few line breaks for the change of scene/characters?
Poor Hinata.

I read this story before and i found it again after looking for some good nejisaku fics. Then i asked myself if i am ready to experience another kind of bittersweet story of tragedy. Lol noooo i caaaant! Years ago, i remember crying after reading this. I'm tempted to read it now because i know this story is good but it's still gonna break my heart in pieces so I'm not gonna read it now. You did great in this fic tho. Will come back when my heart is emotionally prepared for the feels.

Damn, seems like every good history including NejiSaku it's filled with tragedy. My soft heart doesn't ever allows me to put a fav on histories that make me so sad, but it felt right to write a solid review about how much I loved the deepness of it all. The story was really original and I've a thing for summarys that says just enough to make you enter and give it a look. A really good one indeed.

Man, I was giggling like crazy on the first few chapters then it turned out to be bittersweet.. It's really good though. Good job!

I...am very. confused,loved the story though

wow... just... wow. so freaking heartbreaking...

Oh my goodness I actually cried. It was just so heartbreaking, with Sasuke dying, Hinata losing Naruto, and having Naruto lose Sakura while Neji and Sakura lost each other... a completely convoluted mess of sorrow because some was fake and some was real and either way someone's heart broke. A little salty Saduke had to die though, because I actually love him, especially the way you portrayed him, but I understand it was necessary for the story. Also, what sad sad endings! That means Sakura and Neji and Shikamaru and Ino all died young if Hinata and Kiba are still alive! Also, I'm guessing that Naruto probably also died young because the kids asking for the story probably know their Hokage's wife, and obviously it can't be Sakura in real life so they'd know the story was fake and the legacy Hinata created for him wouldn't hold up. All in all, a beautiful story that I'm so grateful you finished, even though it was heartbreaking.

Good lord I had forgotten how intense this story was. One of the most powerful Naruto fics I have ever read. Any praise is gratuitous for such a flawless, evocative piece. Thank you for the treasure.

Damn... this is just incredible. Your stories are definitely amazing.

My heart just broke a little, I really enjoyed reading your story. I could feel every character's despair... if that makes any sense? Thank you for sharing your story

Ahhhh f****ck! I saw this in my favorites and had to remind myself of why it was there because I forgot and gosh darn it now I know. I had forgotten how horribly heart breaking and moving this story was and now it's 3am and I'm rolling around in angst, what have you done! The ending is so sad for everyone involed but the impact it leaves is fantastic. Now only if I could stop feeling so sad for everyone involed. Beautiful, I would fave this a second time if I could.

wooooahhh

woooaAAAHH

MINDBLOWN I love this story a lot, it's so pretty and devastating and I just love it

Buckets of tears, you really rendered me speechless. :)