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Phoenixcatch7 chapter 4 . 5/7/2019 'Quiet.' While Soifon is interrogating Nel, there are at least four more arrancar running pretty much freely around town, Grimmjow and Ichigo are going at it directly overhead, and hollows are swarming. And Rangiku and Orihime are taking over the world one ice cream shop at a time. Quiet. |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/27/2015 Awe I really wanted to see Toshiro's reaction to Issin. |
NicoleBL chapter 4 . 8/4/2015 'Zaraki Kenpachi didn't believe in much, but apparently he believed in love.' .. wow, excellent line :'D I love this fic, so much that makes me sad that you never manages to complete it. Still, your IchiHitsu fics are at the top of the best fics I read about the pairing, I also love the characterization of the other characters involved in them.. Ah anyway, I'll keep following this, altho I know there was no activity from you for a very long time in here... |
Lord Geovanni chapter 4 . 7/11/2015 This seems like an interesting concept for this pairing. I particularly like Toshiro with Ichigo but it tends to be much more difficult than most couples. The level of detail that you placed in showing the differences between Toshiro and Ichigo is outstanding and leaves me confident that future chapters would be an excellent endeavor for me to read. However, the last 5 years without an update, as well as almost the same amount of time with no action by you on this site, leaves me feeling as if you will never read these words. Such a pity. |
JBubbles chapter 4 . 10/16/2011 Nhaaa, a cliffie! Right when Hitsugaya would be with Ichigo among the crazy living ones! updates! I'm loving your fic, it has a great plot and it is awesome to read it, your style making long chapters beautiful and enticing; |
Midknight Killer chapter 4 . 4/28/2011 Awesome story! I really like your writing style , there's just enough details to not overwhelm and the dialogues are really smooth. Also the thoughts of the characters are...well...In Character if that makes sense The plot has taken a nice twist now that Hitsugaya is stationed in the Real World and that Grimmjow is living with Inoue and Neliel and her Fraccion. It would be nice if you added snippets of the time when they were first getting together.. Can't wait for the next chapter and keep writing! |
Varia no Shizue chapter 4 . 1/14/2011 I love IchiHitsu. They're just too good together :) And aw, poor little Shiro-chan XD |
Ehem I am to lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 1/8/2011 I think you are awesome. For writting Ichi/Hitsu. There should be more in this world to fufill our souls, and I know this is putting such a heavy burden on you, but please, I must have more! -Grace PS. You are a very good writer if I must say. And the fact you add Ichi/Hitsu to your very good writing makes it fantastically good. Wink wink. |
rikachan chapter 4 . 12/28/2010 soo cute! continuee please! |
Teldra chapter 4 . 11/16/2010 Definitely looking forward to more of this story :) |
bluedoves chapter 2 . 9/21/2010 i have ju noticed the length of time between chap 1and 4! please please please update and keep this story alive - it has great plot potential |
bluedoves chapter 4 . 9/21/2010 this fic is so well written! i'm really enjoying it - nice long chapters too. all though i should be working... |
IOTR chapter 1 . 9/15/2010 I love this story so far and you really sold this pairing to me, I've never even considered it before this. :) My only concern is that Hitsugaya's appearance is that of a child.. so wouldn't this kind of be weird? The sex and all.. I think Ichigo's like 1 foot 8 inches taller or something like that. |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/15/2010 I love this story, it's so well writen and thought out, not to mention romantic, I love these two togehter, Keep up the good work and update soon! |
sunshine-in-writing chapter 4 . 8/9/2010 Aw MAN! This made me laugh so hard! I hope you update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next! |