This is good, it is a shame there isn't any more.

devoured this story. there are a few minor quibbles, but it's overall a goddamn tragedy this story didn't continue. it's so colossally rare to find naruto stories that portray the harsh reality of what a world of killers trained from childhood to butcher other people might look like. And the final twist of a Gai-trained sasuke... it gave me shivers both for the potential alternative mentality and the affect on his skillset as well as the sheer novel originality of the concept. this was a treat back to front.
for the love of cthulu please resurrect this work.

really to bad theres been no updates in a long time its a really good story

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it's a pity this stops here, i feel like it's just starting to get interesting... :/

"good old fashioned blah blah" You do realize ALL of that is USELESS against superpowers right? That's KINDA THE POINT OF THE SERIES, these guys are SUPERPOWERED, any ONE of them would take apart an entire CITY of real ninja! Besides isn't "punching and kicking" lee's shtick, not naruto's.

I fail to see why EVERYBODY gives naruto "wind" I mean by the later half of the series he's got EVERY affinity! and he didn't train to get em', if it was tailed beast thing, then shouldn't he start with fire and wind? Considering kurama CAN BREATHE FIRE?

Yeah your oc COULD kill him and then the fox gets released and the hokage executes him and the village is destroyed and the world is ruined... GREAT PLAN. Naruto is like an undetonated nuclear warhead.. A "broken arrow"... You want it to do what it's supposed too, BUT you must walk VERY LIGHTLY around it and handle it with KID GLOVES!

Excuse me, do you have the time to be cut for our Lord and Killer, Jashin-sama?
Neat way to explain the gealing technique.

J'aime beaucoup c'est très bien écrit.

I laughed so hard on this part and I'm in the middle of class...

When are you going to update

Can you please update soon? I can’t wait for the next chapter!

You make ninjas seem even cooler than cannon did!
So wicked awesome!
Why did you stop writing it?

best fanfic ever

please updateee

Good