he doesn't deserve forgiveness in this shitty story

Yes! But how in the world could you possibly end the story there?!

I would love to see a sequel to this, one that tells us how they're adjusting and whether or not there will be little time lords running about. That would be a fantastic addition to this wonderful story.

Oh, I love this, it was amazing!

Great story!

brilliant! and i'm so glad she slapped him after that 5 and a half months (nice touch, by the way)

I thought this story was deliciously cute! I loved it!

Oh goodness, have I not reviewed this before? Ack! I know I've read it at least three times before this one... And dear Rassilon, it looks like I didn't favourite it either. That is truly odd. O.o

Anyway. I love this. I want to hug it. _

aww! omg! love this chapter so much!

this paragraph, especially, was /gorgeous/

“Your skin is like fire and silk—a candle flame and I'm the moth who can't stay away even if I get burnt. You've no idea how long I've wanted this—wanted you. Burn with me, Rose... We'll blaze across the universe, you and I.”

This whole story was fantastic, and I'm adding it to my faves (a rare honour). Thank you for giving me the pleasure of reading. It was full of beatiful imagery, and the world was so well-thought-out, the characters were written well and the plot moved along at just the right speed.

It was fantastic and brilliant, to quote two Doctors )

run on to the next chapter! what a shame it's nearly over

tis clever. you is clever. well done )

he so deserved that

oh dear...where has the Doctor gone?

ohh, I love that last line. Really sums them up. I loved them dancing too P very sweet

pwetty dancing P I love dances! They rock! (Even though I can't dance and would die of embarrassment if I ever had to go to one, but they look so beautiful, don't they?)