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please update soon! Your writing is actually not that bad, and I looove your storyline. So please don’t give up

Oh come on? Really...fuck

As far as I know, your a damn good writer. Please update soon!

Well, then. It seems that you have decided to drop this, after all.

It looks like Harry will be staying with Lily and James, for the time being. The meeting has concluded, or just about, which means everyone will start heading out. Harry will meet his not-siblings in the next chapter.

Harry had never existed, then. Voldemort has also been around for 25 years with no break. Either the prophecy was never made, heard or fulfilled. Is Neville alive? Of course, as a self fulfilling prophecy, should Voldemort never hear it, there would be no reason to act on it. When Harry tells his tale, I hope it gets adressed. Then again, the prophecy may have been entirely different. Perhaps it called with Harry, a dimensional traveler, to defeat the Dark Lord. He may have been destined to be there, or it could be yet another self fulfilling prophecy.

Chris is either a) an alternate version of Harry b) a child born at sometime other than Harry, but not an alternate version

Harry, then, either died or was never born. Seeing as Ron didn't have any reaction to the name, he probably died young, if he was born at all. Likely, as most who write dimensional traveling fics involving the Potters, Chris is a child born after he death of Harry, Halloweeen 1981. Therefore, Chris is younger. He may have already been conceived at the time of death. He also could have been born with a significant age gap, while the Potters grieved for their lost son.

I hope this gets to the meeting of his not-parents before you dropped it. That sounds like it will be interesting. James is with Lily, then? I wasn't quite sure. Some alternate universes change that. Was Harry never born? It sounded like the two may have some other child(ren).

The Deluminator is a curious thing. It is usually said and implied that the sole one in existence was an invention of Albus Dukbledore. However, that was not technically confirmed. Is this artistic lisence, or did you not know/forget?

And, there it is. I realize why he hasn't noticed too many odds things. The differences would have been more different and noticeable with time travel. It is not time travel, but dimensional travel.

In this universe Harry either a) Died b) Was never born c) Is around, but doesn't look/act like this one (same name, different person. If he died, Neville is either the BWL or also dead. If that's the case, had Ruddle been running rampant for two decades without that one decade break?

Well, things should hopefully get cleared up. If not becuase Dumbledore is a brilliant mind that has probably ventured into the realm of academia that concerns time travel, then becuase Harry is slowly starting to put things together. With three examples of people he knew who look physically different, it should hit him.

Just a few little things that I noticed. I beleive every time " 's" was mentioned, the "St. Mungo" part would be removed. However, I am not entirely certain, since the word(s) was/were removed. Also, you reversed Occumency and Legilimency. The former is a former of magical mental protection, whereas the later is similar to mind reading.

Other than that, I suppose the reactions are understandable. Harry got angry surprisingly quickly. He has been very stressed, as of late, so it's not unfounded. However, I'm not sure if anger was the most likely response. I suppose he is a teenager. Still, I find disbelief a more probable reaction. He might think someone was pulling a sick joke.

Despite the fact that you have only written school things, this little story seemed to be doing well. It's not as if there are any glaring mistakes of grammar or canon. As for whether you can string a plot together, including all of the sub stories, and keep it from becoming a massive mess, I know not. I'll have to wait before passing judgement on that. Characterization wise, everything seems fine. These characters are reacting realistically to their given situation, which is more than can be said for some.

I enjoyed reading this story, i'm guessing it's not going to be updated again, so I just wanted to say thanks for writing it up to this point

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