Too cool. The quote that Hermes got wrong, cute.

Good story, thoughtful, and I love the line, "Does it take a lot of courage to end a journey...?" Those following lines really meant a lot to me.

Inspiring.

~OdiPhi

Wow graet story! loved it! poor Hermes just can't seem to get qutes write dose he?

I agree with the above reviewer, don't say you don't like this written work because it's amazing. Short but sweet, the ending made me feel nostaligic for some reason but that's a good thing. Great job and keep writing.

'I wrote this a while ago. I don't particularly like it.'

Don't say things like that, there is no excuse for a good piece. A wonderful and magnificent shot. I find your outlook on humans really interesting. I do believe as well that humans are like stars, we're always moving, yet we don't know we are. We feel a need to travel when we look at the sky, but we need courage to do that. We humans are like flowers, we're everywhere, each with different colors, scent and shapes but makes one beutiful garden. The title is about the only thing out of place as from what i can tell, everything else is telling us of what we humans are like. But of course, it's your choice.