Wow...that had to be the most beautifully sad thing I've ever read. You have a talent.

I'm decidedly going to die of heartache after reading that.

I wanted a happy ending really badly, but I knew I wouldn't get it, quite honestly.

I love the desperate Kakashi. I love writing him, I love reading him, I love drawing him.

You portrayed him perfectly.

i wanna cry.

Oh my Gos, that was amazing!

I was seriously getting ready to cry throughout that story, but even though it was sad, it was s orealistic.

You know, cuz there are peopl who go through that int he world, and all they really can do is pray.

Great work, I really loved it!

This is the very first fanfiction that has ever made me cry. It's so /heartfelt/. I can barely stand it! (in a good way)

This definitely got me teary.

As the others have said it's the sadness that makes this story so good. As terrible as it is, I love that she never wakes up, its part of reality. I've had some experience with family of mine thats been critically ill and you did a good job of creating the desperate feeling that comes with it. If you'd had her even give any sign of getting better at the end it wouldn't be quite the same. I think one of my favorite parts was when you were describing that Kakashi knows it smells like a hospital and decaying (is that the word you used?) organs but he believes it smells nice. One part I thought was almost overkill was when you described 'no matter how bloody/cut up his hands were from paper cranes he'd still make them'. It's good to show how he is to try something or anything but it's almost unrealistic that someone's hands would get bloody. If he was making one thousand cranes after about 20 he'd get the hang of it and wouldn't mess them up. That said he could be cutting his hands on purpose as a punishment to himself. Good Job

Ack! So sad! But that's what I love about it!

That was really sad. But really good. Shame on you.

This is fabulous in its integrity

I am honestly at a complete loss here... What a wretchedly beautiful story. I hate KakaSaku, scorn it with a passion, and yet I think you may have sparked something in me.

You're a terrible person. This is a terrible story.

But it made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. So, I'll put it on my list.

Cheers,

your most terrible fan

[because this was perfect in every sense of the word, despite how I want to feel about it]

That's so sad! Can you make a sequel with a happy ending?

Omg I almost started to cry!

very melancholic, twisted my heart and made me teary eyed. nicely written!

-hasu86

I actually cried when I read this. - I have this strange feeling in my chest right now, but I'm not exactly sure why. And like I said for Pyre, I just don't know how to say what I feel because I'm weak and stupid like that. I can't even find one word good enough to describe what I feel for this story, even though I know so many. My brain is on overload and I'm bawling like a fool. And just the idea of this, the pain Kakashi feels and his prayers, it feels true, but it's making me reflect too, maybe I've lost all my faith, maybe it's all been washed away, I haven't hurt like this in awhile. But I'm very thankful for this story, and when I do pray, well I'm realizing now that there is no reason to be losing faith. I take too much for granted. If I could I'd favorite this story a hundred times. Why a hundred? I do not know. I will favorite it once though.

I'm in the strangest mood now, please keep writing stories. -

I really wish I hadn't been late for this one.

Cheers!