Why did you put they are in an open relationship when they clearly aren’t? They are obviously monogamous.

Ugh the word is YOU'RE!

This story is also very cliche. The whole guilt tripping Edmund plot point is very overused.

There are several parts of your story that are glossed over and simply ignored, and I feel they are imperative to make your story believable. This includes the party, any sort of interaction with Susan, Peter and Edmund coming out/reactions from all characters, etc.

And I find it hard to believe that Lucy and Susan would just accept them immediately without a second thought. Incest, especially within a very close-knit family, would CHANGE EVERYTHING about their relationships with each other.

I LUV them and yes, Edmund is beautiful, glad Peter knows this

Ohh I wish there is a sequel. Too cute to be true!

LOL, aww that was cute. Mushy but cute. I enjoyed it, hope you continue to write Narnia fanfiction.

Wildfire

really nice and it's really a kind thing for you to thank all of your reveiwers, and if i have my way you won't be flamed at all. You write really well and this is a good story.

omi god this is the best story ever i lov it so much its so sweet and thoughtfull and loving pls pls pls continue it :D

lovely story!

Description: Indescribable. [Is That How You Spell It?]

Feelings: Not Enough Existing Vocabulary to Express Emotions.

Current State: Not an Inkling as to What's Happening, Too Mesmerised by ::Your:: Story.

...!

*Sudden Light Bulb*.. I Love YOU![Go! Edmund&Peter!] D

*Swimming in FluFF*.. *Drowning in FluFF* D

-XQuickQuotesQuillX.

It is really cute *swoon* Idiotic just suits Pete. You're amazing, BM. I really love this pairing. However, this couple needs more attention, don't you think? So please write more *glomps*

Yummy. I love those boys, so shippable!

Aw, how cute. :D Nice to see Peter comforting his brother...in an unbrotherly way, to boot. xD

I absolutely love this! It was wonderful..and it was just too adorable!

Trust me, I really liked ur story..Though I guess i would have liked if you had written more and developped the characters, it would have made this more real, but nonetheless it was very well written!

Please dont be offended, this is juts my own opinion; dont take what i say seriously...

Most importantly, your story is definitely going to be in my favorites! Thank you so much for writing! xoxo 8D

Well, this was actually really good. Sweet and fluffy, but with very hot undertones. *glares at flames-reviews* The author DID put up a warning, so really, there's no reason for y'all to be complaining. And, um, dude, it's FICTION, as in not real, eh? So, just...get over yourselves or just ignore it you don't like it. Stop bitching to the rest of us that can accept it. But, a realy good story, darling. *loves* XD

This is a very nice little fic. :)

The first chapter is sweet, cute, and very well written. The second is a nice continuation of the story, especially the very end showing the role reversal. :)

I'm impressed, and wonder if you'll be writing any further Peter/Edmund fics. I'll certainly be back to read & review them if you do! :)

(And by the way, I reported bubblymuggle4's review as abusive, so hopefully it'll be removed in the near future. No one should have to read that kind of s**t.)