Hahah! "Was it good for you too?" Haha, perfect. _

Also, I must say, I believe reading a good reaction from Kuroyanagi is possibly even better than watching one.

(BTW, am I the only person who thinks Kid looks a little too much like Brad Pitt?)

Keep up the good work! )

-Eloarei

Ah, I want more! That was really well written and the characters are all IC. I really like it

Ahahah! Poor Shigeru! And you managed to pick up the canon characterisation of Kuroyanagi and adding it with uke-ish charm for spice. Great!

ZOMG! This is super, super hilarious and remarkably in character!Both Shigeru and Kuroyan (especially his reaction) are perfect. I totally enjoyed it - the Yakitate! fandom definitely needs more love as well as fantastically humorous fics like this one.