more!

Nice idea

Me: This story sounds hilarious!

Kat: Can you update maybe?

Vix: The future is slowly changing... Wilbur, go make sure that you don't dissappear in front of any one besides Lewis.

Wilbur: The only reason she'll even talk to me now is to scold me. Great..

Vix: Just shut your mouth! Got it?

Wilbur: Yes, Miss Up Tight.

Oh! Awesome, awesome! You must continue. 3

I want to know what happens!

updarte? me want to see more!

OH MY GOSH, I couldn't stop laughting, especialy with the part where Wilbur was cracking up about Franny making the remark about how Lewis and her were in love, when the elephants were coming out! Anyway, great story, definetly one of my favorites, please finish this soon! :)

OH boy...that can't be good...

I couldn't stop laughing here! Nicely done, I can totally see Wilbur doing that...

I think Franny, well...didn't wake up on the right side of the bed...how old is she here?

~Robi

Wilbur dressing like an old lady? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Now that's funny and yes Cornelius is right about one thing, Franny and Wilbur both carry that cocky trait and Wilbur got it from her through the process of Meoisis in Prophase 1. :) That's the truth. :)

Alisi T. :)

HAHA! This story is hilarious so fair! I can just see Wilbur shooting holes in the kitchen ceiling! This story is gonna get reaalyy good...I can tell. Seriously I have like this radar in my head that goes off in my head whenever a MTR story is gonna turn out great. I had it during the movie, I've had it during most of doodlegirll's stories and now I'm having it with yours! Please update!

I need more...LIKE NOW!

Oh no...someone is so going to fear clowns after this one...

~Robin