| Reviews for Wierd |
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   GiLaw The Sparky chapter 3 . 5/12/2013 OMG this is such a good story! Update soon! |
| sagelynaive chapter 1 . 2/5/2013 uh-oh sprx got sick |
| Phoenix-LOL chapter 3 . 7/1/2009 Woah... continue, like, now. Or else I will , like, totally die of curiosity. (i like the word "like") |
| Moka Raiden chapter 3 . 4/14/2009 o pelase contuue XD |
| Netbug-Archive chapter 1 . 2/19/2008 You have an interesting plot for this, and your dialog is good, but there's also some things tha could be improved... 1. Double check your spelling. There's quite a few errors. 2. The fic seems rushed. That was a short chapter and yet multitudes of things happened. Sometimes fasted paced is good, but when you're trying to pull out the drama, you need to slow down and add more detail. Right now your fic is little discription and lots of dialoug. You need to balance it out. Describe more emotion, show the pace. When Nova was expressing her worries to Sprx, that could have been an extremely touching ad emotional moment, but you need to add more detail and description as do what is happening. Otherwise it goes by so fast and feels so flat that there's nothing there really. So, awesome fic idea, and good dialoug, but it doesn't get across the emotion you want due to lack of outside dialoug discription. |
| IHKF chapter 3 . 9/22/2007 You better update soon.I get angry when people don't updsate. |
| irock123 chapter 3 . 9/4/2007 Great story! You did an awesome job! PLEASE update! I want to-not want to, HAVE to find out what happened. |
| xXShadow077Xx chapter 3 . 7/29/2007 Cool chapter! But it was a little to short!:) |
| LittleBlue33 chapter 3 . 7/29/2007 oh cliffy! update soon |
| dragonqueenc chapter 3 . 7/28/2007 XD! Me: Trever huh? : Intreasting name... : (Is cringing her fistS) Me: Uh oh! She's not in her happy place! : Why SHouldn't you ripp him apart, I have no idea! But why you should there are WAY more that a millon reasons! Me: Oh she's MAD! : Wouldn't want to get in her way right know! : UpDate Soon! SO I can see this guy get mauled! |
| dragonqueenc chapter 2 . 7/26/2007 XD! Me: I bet Nellie and Aqua REALLY hate me now. : Hm, I guess they most likly do... : UpDate Soon! |
| daydream53 chapter 1 . 7/26/2007 who said it? come on tell me, tell me. Fine Fine you you dont have to tell me. i can wait for you to update. so... update soon. very very soon. lovs Dream |
| dragonqueenc chapter 1 . 7/26/2007 XD! Me: Yay! It's good! And SPOVA! YAY! : (Takes a stepp away from me) : UpDate Soon! |
| ClassicBeauty09 chapter 1 . 7/26/2007 ohh this is good! :) I hate the cliffy though. lol It was a great first chapter it really caught my attention. Great job! |
| LittleBlue33 chapter 1 . 7/25/2007 oh continue I really what to see what well happen next |
