Oh my god please continue?! D: It's WONDERFUL!

This is actually such a beautiful, heart-rendering story. The love Teddy feels for his parents is just adorable, his character is believable (definately JK Rowling standard), if you get what I mean..XD

The idea itself is just...guh. 3 I mean, it has been done a few times with the whole Teddy/his parents memories thing, but you've made this fic unique with your style of writing and the narrative behind it.

I love all the literary techniques you used too, and the use of paragraphing. You're obviously a person who knows their English skills ;)

Oh, when Teddy went into Remus' first memory where he's bitten by Greyback, I was just like "._. zomg this is when he gets bitten, I bet. I think Im gonna cry if it is...". D8 *dabs eyes*

Also, this sentence in chapter 4 was powerful:

"...he remembered the fates of the four careless lads clustering around James's package of wriggling frogs, swapping cards and laughing over Uric the Oddball's nose-picking – all four dead, one a traitor, one a wrongly-convicted killer, one murdered, another tortured by the past and his own body and mind…"

I'd thought about that a lot, and how weird and cruel it must be for people in 'Harry Potter' to look back on, like, a photograph of the Marauders now and think how they're all dead. And they all died in such horrible ways. It would make me a bit...I dont know how to explain it, sad? to see a moving photograph of 4 boys laughing and smiling, and then realising that they've been murdered (more or less all of them in the end). It's horrible _

Oh, dont listen to that mod on mugglenet ff. He obviously doesnt get that 'Harry Potter' is fantasy. every magical thing you've written here is canon in the books, so it can't really be unbelievable. -.- Some people annoy me.

Sorry if I rambled a bit. I can't really do decent reviews XD

Anyway! Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

This is an amazing story and I hope you will go on with it one time...

Hey.

This needs to be updated. It's too good not to be. So get on that, yes?

I really love it! Now where's my cookie!

awesome!I feel better already after a chapter! ;) the please!

oh my was so hard to .you really managed to get that scene.

Best fanfic EVER!

I want to let you know I just found this FF and I don't care what the mugglenet mod thought, I think it is GREAT!

It is extremely believable and I really really hope you update soon! You haven’t abandoned this have u?

Btw: Don't you just lurve Teddy?

A great, lovable piece of writing D

Hugs and cookies,

~LS

Holy f* s*. That was amazing. Absolutly. And it's only the Prologue! Astounding. Jo would be proud. I need to wrap this review up so I can read the rest.

This is so good!

Whatever happened to this amazing story? Update, update! :)

Are you dead? Or is life just busy right now?

I love it. Can't really describe this any further ! I LOVE IT! Poor poor Remus, but exacly as I imagine happened to him. Aww! Oh my I'm deeply shocked. Wow! You know this is going right in my fave! Thak you so very very much. Yeah and PLEASE update soon:)

Bloody brilliant. Abso-bloody-brilliant. And frak those Mugglenet twerps, they wouldn't know a good story if it danced in front of them naked wearing Dobby's tea cosy...this is pure gold.