This was soo beautiful! I don't usually read fanfics about this pairing but it was wonderful! You made me like Mai and Lin's relationship! You are incredible! Have a nice day!

AWWWW LOVE IT,fluff pure fluff, but im lso grateful, I just finished the season and I couldnt take not knowing wht happened next so thanks u saved me there!

me encanto esta pareja no esta nada mal

that was cute! you should write some more they were so cute... it should be longer i never thought that they could be together but now i see that it's possible.

Perfect the naru and mai thing was getting old your a true visionary

Usually I am not a fan of Lin/Mai pairings, but I loved this one.

You might have mentioned a timeline for this relationship. Like how was Mai when specific events occurred.

Aww, i love it. Your an awesome writter as well! Your writting style reminds me, don't take it as a bad thing because i do not intend it to be, of child fiction authors. It has the same flow, does that make any sort of sense? Still in my mind this is a compliment as some of my favorite stories are child fiction, like the Tanith and Gwydion serise, so worth a read if you haven't all ready!
Anways loved reading this and i know i will propably be reading it again in the future.

a very nice fluff... like it...

How cute. -

OMG.

This is so cute. I love how you paced the entire thing, and I was laughing at poor John XD

Lin's got a lot to be grateful for, ne?

.AWESOME.

seirously.

liked the pairing and lOVED the story...oneshot...whatever...

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rock on and payce out

A great story I felt that you captured Lin's personality quite well

so great ! I loved this story !

~Very sweet~