I guess that was it... This story had a lot of potential even though Lily was to flippant and didn't consider Severus's feelings much. I felt sorry for him.

It is a pity that you did not abandon the story. Ten years have passed. Lily and Severus are different from the characters of your other story. Lily can't see beyond her fingers. James has matured in her, and she also remained a sheep. How can you not understand that a man next to you has feelings. She is so arrogant that Severus thinks she owes everything to her. He must be holy and jump with her into the fire. She does not think why, and does Snape have her own life ?. Why is he doing this? What for?
I like how Albus puts her in her place. Lily indicates her stupidity.
I am glad that in the last chapter Snape told her at least a little. But Lily does not understand that this is no longer a boy, but Riedl's favorite, and he has eggs. That she humiliates him like a man. I am truly sorry for Severus. He does not owe her anything. And this makes me even sadder that you stopped writing. I would very much like Severus to lose his patience and he showed her complete indifference to her antics and was interested in other women. It needs to be lowered a little to the ground. And do not watch how she walks in underwear, as before an impotent.
I understand Lily's grief. But she is an Auror and a member of the order. She saw how people die every day and children die on both sides. When she married and gave birth to a child during the war, she had to assess the risks. The risk is increased by its debt and blood status.
I still hope that you will return and complete your fascinating history at your leisure.

lost cause
Can they get there already
Its taking too long
WAY TOO LONG!

I adore this story. I just checked your page, and was so, so happy to see that you have intentions of finishing it. I'll bookmark this, and hope you will update soon. :)

Did something happen?wht happwneed to every tuesday?I like story btw

the premise is good, but rdally, the writing is broken... the dialogues do not flow, I cannot visualise properly.

This is quite good! I do hope that you continue it. You make Lily believable, and Snape is, well, Snape (which is good).

You got the two mind magics confused.

Good so far. There's a nonsensical element in it however. The whole world can't know that Snape is a Death Eater while he's working at Hogwarts. Peter 'outing' him to all those people would mean he couldn't keep his job.

And finally we get to sexy times. I approve: Severus deserves a good make out session.

This is a really good story. I do hope you will update and continue.

Please keep writing! I know its been years, but this story is really good despite some minor complaints that others seem to have!

why snape and Lily figh? And why Snape kissed Lily in the chapter 13 collarbone

I don't suppose that you plan on updating anytime soon? :/

Too bad you ditched this story, is it finished on another site perhaps?