| Reviews for Burning Crusade |
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uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 3 . 7/8 gooo |
uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 2 . 7/8 go |
uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 1 . 7/8 goooof chp |
Jakeros chapter 19 . 5/9 I'm glad Ilya is getting a chance. poor girl literally got screwed out of her family and manipulated into becoming a monster. |
Jakeros chapter 18 . 5/9 good to know Lucy there is a bitch when it comes to his wife lmao. |
Jakeros chapter 16 . 5/9 you know, I used to lean towards the shirouxrin pairing when I didn't know the whole truth about archer. but having watched UBW, I can safely say I'm satisfied with archerxrin now because at the end of the day, rin is destined for shirou no matter which version he is. |
Jakeros chapter 3 . 5/7 I know this is years late and I cant he the only one to point it out, but sakura doesnt gave emerald hair. emerald is green, sakyra doesnt have green hair. sakura has purple hair since she's rin's sister. |
2562894620 chapter 1 . 3/13 TheForcefulNature Those two are the same hero in the Fate universe due to the fact that they share the same origin, Hercules is the form that the Romans used for Heracles. This is not an error on the authors part. |
TheForcefulNature chapter 4 . 8/10/2019 I know this is a little late, but for future reference, 'Heracles' is an entirely separate hero than 'Hercules', and in Fate/ Stay Night, Illya's servant is 'Hercules'. I mean, they are similar, but the mythology is different. Man, it will be so embarrassing if you just send me a clip of Illya saying 'Heracles' and not 'Hercules', but still, I'm pretty sure I'm right. |
TheForcefulNature chapter 2 . 8/10/2019 You asked for ideas. It's simple; Make 'em fuck. (this was a joke btw) |
jcampbellohten chapter 2 . 9/22/2017 Okay, there's a lot that's way off from canon, which judging from the posting dates is because this was written before that canon happened. Unfortunately, I can't look past it to continue reading. There was also the matter of using a lot of words to say something simple in an attempt at purple prose, like when Arturia blushed over mention of falling in love. |
jcampbellohten chapter 1 . 9/22/2017 What does he mean, "Who would have thought Rider would be Medusa?" The organization of angels ought to have always known that, because Algernon must exist outside of time if Mio retrieved Arturia in her time yet they know about the HGW and the other servants are there. Also, it's not a stupid slip-up to call her Arturia because he could have just gotten her true name from the file they obviously have on her. |
Guest chapter 16 . 7/9/2017 So, in this story Archer never was a counter guardian under Alayas contract? An investing take on the storyline. |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/19/2017 You lost me at angels. Maybe it's just me, but when ever you get someone trying to reimagine a Character by adding wings it just stinks of a nerd with a sephiroth fetish. Pass. |
chibi313 chapter 1 . 7/14/2015 ...well this sounds pretty interesting owo |