That was...

Not quite sure if I get it, but what I understood I liked. Perfect character piece.

Hmmmmmmmm. Not bad:-)

:D :D :D lolololololol nice way to make evangelion funny

Wow, there's a tone of things going on here, all kinds of little hints and possibilities just swimming in the mix. I'm not entirely sure I caught all the implications even after a second read-through.

You know, I don't know why, but I really like this story; maybe it's the irony in that the only people who notice others are the ones who don't actually know them, or maybe its because it feels like this is a pretty deep piece and I feel like I'm missing an entire level of communication. Regardless, good job.

It's nice to see an author with style. You know what you're doing and I like that. It's refreshing to read stories from an author that arn't just random fumblings in the dark, or repeats of familiar plotlines.

I don't know how to say this but... I think I might be in love...

In all seriousness though, I'll keep an eye out for you. It's a little early to say so, but it looks like you're one of those rare authors that I really enjoy reading. Keep it up.

o_o

That was... weird. I liked it though.

I gotta say, this was an amazing fic. Absolutely hilarious, especially that part about Section 2.

hehehe... real nice story. This is a work that shows how mild humor still can be funny. All to often humor is incredibly rough these days but this was something that slowly and gently weaved a story that, in the end, elicted a chuckle from me.

Brilliance, if only because it's the first piece of intelligent humor to grace this site in a while.

You're right about the lighthearted writing style, by the way, it lends itself perfectly to the setting.

Even if you don't quite get the deeper aspects of this you take something away. So I say again, brilliance.

peace out

-Thraylion