At least he came to his senses. I suppose Sounga drove him crazy like it did Inuyasha. though, its a Navol sword so it shouldn't take him over right? How come Kiriaku never used his own sword? On a different note: what will Sesshomaru and Inuyasha do with Sounga? how will they get out of Navolia? what will the Grudge do (they are intruders after all).
Great story!

Well, there's only really one thing I can say at the present moment: I'm glad Sesshomaru is alive, and that he had enough strength in him to fight against Though, I suppose he must be reeling with shock over the whole "little brother" thing. Hey, now that I mention it, that's almost the exact same thing Sesshomaru said to inuyasha at the beginning of the series. Ah, fate is a funny thing. hm, wonder if that's what Sesshomaru is thinking. Question: how did Inuyasha and kagome know something was going on at the house? Was it Inuyasha's ears? or perhaps they had already been coming back. makes me wonder what they were doing outside in the first place; kiriaku had specifically said not to go outside and to stay out of site.
Ha ha! I guess I thought up a lot more stuff then I had said at the beginning. Funny how the idea's flow with fingers meet keyboard.

I suppose Kiriaku is particially driven by desperation: to save his mom and fullfil this grudge thing. Sounds intense this whole 'grudge' thing. Also makes me more curious about what Navols are exactly and what they can do. I've assumed they have a human-like appearance though. But that's about all I've got.

I kinda feel sorry for Kiriaku. He feels betrayed by Inutaisho and has resolved to kill off any and all of his descendents, destroying his family line, even if it means killing himself once all other descendents have been enillated. I feel the sorriest for Morada though, she fell in love with a demon, bared him a son (knowing full well the consequences of her actions) and is now quite insane. Poor woman.

Uh-oh. Is Kiriaku realizing that he has always been attacted to his siblings? That now that he's met both of them he can't just get rid of his blood realatives, the only reminders of their father (because they look much more like him that kiriaku does)? Poor him. And I suppose Inuyasha used the Wind Scar, though if he did I'm sure you would have described it better. Hm, Inuyasha must have been quite the scary site to almost kill sesshomaru without the Wind Scar.

It makes me wonder somtimes at how trusting Kagome is. Kiriaku does put on quite a convincing performace though. fyi, in my other review, I said that I just knew that this would be a great story, and I was right: this is awesome! It must be rather intrigueing to Inuyasha's group, meeting someone from before Sesshomaru was born who isn't wrinkling (like Myoga and Totosai), but who has a youthful appearance. Ah, that thought just brought a how bunch of questions: how will sesshomaru react? did he already know he had an elder brother? How will Kiriaku react to Sesshomaru's traveling with a human? Does Sesshomaru know anything about navols? ah, and another one: will the two have to work together to stop their murderous sibling? ('course i suppose the answer to that one is obviously "yes") also bring about the questions of how Kiriaku will attempt to kill them.
Great story! Lovin' it!

As men aren't allowed in the birthing chamber, I suppose that, given InuTaisho jumped off a cliff and was looking over the place his son was being born, was standing on a cliff looking down into a valley at a house where Sesshomaru was being born and Kiriaku appeared behind him. Okay, I think I've got a visual now.
What's a Navol? But I suppose I'll find out by reading so don't tell me!

i like it

please update soon i really want to know what happens next

and i hope you read my stories

"my little brother" and "i want to say" and please reveiw please and thanks

please update soon

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sesshomaru 1# wifey

I like this story good,update soon. :D

this story is good

It's pretty good story. Usually I don't like ocs, but Kiriaku is fine and I like him :) Hope you continue soon

PLZ continue this is great!