Yes! I love it! Poor Gilleasbachan. Poor Culloth. Will Mary (Sorry, but I can barely remember her name,much less spell it.) ever be free of the Queen?

this was a very good story. I really enjoyed it.

my "Post Review" button is blue not purple!

Interesting story.

So Mairghread needs something to keep Ronon occupied during Jumper trips?

How about Portable DVD player headphones a selection of DVDs (including Jaws)?

This is a great story, I was wondering, however, how come you didn't put it up on the Wraith Archives C2 community?

I wouldn't have found this fic or its sequel if I hadn't clicked on your name and came to your profile page.

Oh and when you mentioned that Weir no longer liked Mairghread, I thought it was because she realised Mairghread liked Sheppard or something and was jealous.

What a fantastic story, mellon nin! I'm so glad things are looking up in this chapter. And something tells me that once Gil gets over his initial inhibitions, he'll like Teyla too.

I can't wait to get started on the next portion of this... but unfortunately I'll have to, it looks like. I've got shows all day tomorrow... well, I'll continue on asap!

See you soon!

~Kyrie

aw, that's sweet. I love teyla and ronon getting married! yay!

Excellent ending to the first part. I like Gil getting more assertive; telling Teyla he's happy she took care of his little sister. It's nice that Ronan and Teyla are coming into the picture and thank you for keeping the Weir storyline in play. I can't thank you enough for bringing in Daniel; the show should have done the same thing although having gone back and caught up a bit I'm not sure I'm a Vala fan. On to the next part.

More please!

*biting lip and whimpering* Oh, this story is so incredibly good. I wonder how Ronon and Gil will fare with each other? And Ronon and Teyla are getting married at last! HURRAY! I've added this to my alert list, because I'm literally on the edge of my seat for another chapter. Thank you so much for writing it!

Great chapter, mellon nin! I love how you work quotations - especially all your Shakespeare ones and now Mozart, which is great - into everything so very well.

I hope that slap will help get Mairghread out of this funk over the queen... although I don't know what it would take to get over something like that.

More soon, please?

~Kyrie

I'm glad Gilleasbachan lives.I can't wait for next chapter.

Aw, poor Gil. Good thinking, for Mairghread to explain it in a way that he would understand. Hopefully, he'll be able to trust her again. And I loved how excited he got when she mentioned food. Poor guy... but he's on the road to recovery now, yay!

Sorry it took me so long to get to this... homework has an annoying way of claiming first priority over EVERYTHING, doesn't it?

Thanks for the update! So nice to hear from you!

More soon, please?

~Kyrie

Good chapter and I am glad her brother finally understands about the surgery to heal him. It was nice that they wanted Mairghread to be there for the surgery and help him. Please update soon.