I love this story, especially the pink dress. lol D. The lines between the paragraphs were awesome too, did you make them up or did you get them from somewhere? If you did can you tell me where you got them from?

So sweet and so cute. I love this story very much!

Well I guess it was...I WANTED A LEMON!

It's so hard to find Golden Sun LEMONS!

I played the game all night, literally, and I NEED lemon!

I'm just gunna have to write my own...*starts evil laugh*

Anywhoo for your chap being wrote at 5 in the morning it was alright. A pretty good fluff read.

it was good, considering it was written at 5 in the morning with with basically no sleep. some parts were funny, others were freakin hilarious. and i noticed the one quote "…Starting a new journey may not be so hard, or maybe it has already begun…" is from Kingdom Hearts, right? and once more for good measure, it was really good!_

I think this is the first fic I read from you, and I like it! You switched games pretty well, and did an odd genre combination...both compliments! Angst/Humor? I couldn't pull that off if I dropped everything and wrote for the rest of my life. All in all, good fic!

The pairing isn't what I'd call my favorite, but I can tolerate stuff like that.

I'll keep an eye on you for GS fics.

Note: If you haven't already looked it up or something, it's 'plies'. I think 'several ply spells' might work too...I believe you had something like that in your fic?