Woah.

um this is so good? I cried.

niiice

Yes I like this v much

AMAZING!

Poor Sam thinking he had killed Bee. You know this had a better story line than the 2nd and third movies! So are the implants really necessary for Sam now? Will the be able to wake Jazz up soon?

Brilliant story. Well written, and everyone in character.

Awesome. The action sequences were quite nicely done; I could easily picture events as they happened. And the bits of sarcastic humor scattered throughout helped keep certain scenes from getting too dark. Also, Sam and Bumblebee friendship is win.

This was a cool story, fun to read. Thanks

" When this was all over, he hoped he could convince Sam to wash him with the friendly back yard hose rather than that car wash place. That machine was a pervert." I had a laugh-attack for several minutes over that. My mind flashes to the "probe-ulator" from Futurama.

Loved this!

Absolutely wonderful! :)

Fig. I. LOVE YOU. He's so funny. XD Gotta love his sixth sense; third eye; whatever.

Glen. Glen, Glen, Glen. Hahaha! You almost obliterate a country, man? For real? You're an international threat!

I'm curious about what will happen to Jazz. Here's hoping he regains his memory data and goes back to being him.

Oh, my God. Ratchet. AHAHAHAHA! And Ironhide! XD I totally adored that part. Will's comments made it even better.

Jazz protected Miles. He's still the bot we all know and love, deep down there!

Maggie was a beautiful goddess of vengeance right there. Loved that description of her, heh. Not your average tame techie!

Bumblebee fighting against Jazz - well, not Jazz-Jazz. That Jazz thing... drone? Jazzbot. Bee fighting against the Jazzbot made me sad. I mean, I know Megatron's kind of controlling him, but Bumblebee's desperation made me so sad... And his thoughts! His thoughts *killed* me.

Sam reflective thoughts are super-interesting to read! I mean, besides the fact that he think he's losing hi mind, he's also a very interesting guy. LOL.

Let us hope whatever Ratchet has thought works!